Mr. Right

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***Characters may appear OOC : ) but all for the good of the fic!***
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“Speech"
‘Thoughts’
“Speech/Thoughts or Whisper”
*noise/action *

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This world rejects me
This world threw me away
This world never gave me a chance
This worlds gonna have to pay
I dont believe in your institutions
I did what you wanted me to
Like cancer in the system
Ive got a little suprise for you

Something inside of me has opened up its eyes
Why did you put it there did you not realize
This thing inside of me it screams the loudest sound
Sometimes I think I could

Burn

Naruto sat in the middle of his bedroom floor, organizing the heaping mess before him. He felt it was about that time to start cleaning. His room was catastrophic. Dirty clothes, empty ramen cups and papers littered the; floor, dresser and queen sized bed. His room spoke volumes about his personality though. Underneith the unorganized mess was a nice, comfortable, fitting room for him. On his bed; a bright orange and navy blue comforter, with two orange body pillows and three navy blue normal sized pillows lining the headboard to match. Beside the bed wer; two night stands on either side of the bed, with lamps on each of them, bright orange curtains and a round matching rug that he happened to be sitting on. The room was fairly large, big enough for at least two people.
In the corner, was a large fake tree and beside it, sat a computer desk with an Apple laptop open blasting one of his favorite bands. Luckily, he hadn’t had any neighbors to disturb. The apartments were just about new and his “father” Iruka was kind enough to pay for the major expences…well pretty much everything but he swore to himself that he’d pay him back….someday.

Iruka was a pretty well off man and lived with his lover Kakashi. Meaning Naruto had two “fathers” but he didn’t mind. When he was three, his biological parents were killed in a hit-and-run accedent. Iruka had been baby sitting Naruto that day and raised him ever since, with his young silver haired scarecrow lover known as Kakashi.

Naruto was just about finnished when he nioticed his trash was over flowing in his room and in the kitchen that he had cleaned earlier. He gathered all the trash around the house into three, large, white, trashbags and headed to the dumpster, leaving the door wide open.

At the same time, Uchiha Sasuke was climbing the third flight of saitrs, to his new apartment, when he heard “Even Deeper” pouring out of an open door at the end of the hall.

‘Great. Although I love Nine Inch Nails, I’m freaking tired and I want to get some sleep.’

A figure came out of the opened door with three large white trashbags pyramid style obscuring their view.


Naruto was walking unable to see in front of him, he figured he only needed to see the ground anyways, when he saw feet on the left of him, obviously trying to avoid the trash bag baring boy. He noticed that the person had on a really nice; brown, red, and white plaid pair of Converse high-tops.

“Hey, man I like your shoes!” Naruto said passing by.

“Hn.”

Naruto continued down the hallway.

‘Can I get a thank you? What an asshole!’

Sasuke ignored the complement and fished out the key to his apartment, put it in the key hole and-

‘What? The key won’t turn.’

He glanced up at the number to make sure it was correct.

‘Yeah, it’s the right room number…might as well go down to the main office to sort this out…I’m still a little tired I’ll take the elevator.’

Sasuke took the key out and started towards the elevator, pressed the down button and waited.

After Naruto dumped the last trash bag into the dumpster, he heard a call from a passing car.

“Hey Naruto!!”

Although Naruto didn’t have a clue to. Who. The. Hell that was, he yelled back cheerfully anyways.

“Hey Hey!”

Sasuke stood still.

‘Naruto?’

Naruto walked back into the building and noticed the elevator already on its way back up.

‘Ehh, guess I’ll have to take the stairs.’

Naruto moved towards the staircase slowly dreading the fact that he had to walk up three long flights to get to the top.

During Sasuke’s ride down he hoped in the back of his mind that he’d run into this Naruto kid Neji had been going on about.
When the elevator opened he was greeted with,

‘No one,’

Sasuke strode out of the elevator dismissing any thoughts of Naruto looking for any signs to hopefully point him in the direction of the main office.
He noticed a person with long shiny brown hair, that he could have mistaken as Neji, but noticed the more feminine build of the body and quickly dismissed it as a stranger.

“Excuse me miss, do you know where the main office is?”

Said “miss” turned around and pointed
“Oh, hi! It’s that way.”

“Thanks.”

“Sure. Oh and hey? I’m not a girl.”

To say Sasuke was surprised would be an understatement, but he hid it well with his ever-present stoic mask.

“Hn.”

With that, he followed his finger towards the small building to be stopped by the same soft voice.

“Hey, what’s your name?”

Sasuke paused for a while then looked over his shoulder.

“Uchiha, Uchiha Sasuke.”

“I’m Haku, nice to meet you! Hey, if your new around here and get lost, here’s my number call me sometime.”

Haku scribbled his number down winked and handed it to Sasuke.

“Yeah.”…. ‘right’

Sasuke stuffed the piece of paper into his pocket uncaringly along with countless others, and once again turned to his destination...main office.


When he arrived he was disappointed to realize that it was too late.

‘It’s closed?’

Sasuke glanced down at his watch.

‘Six minutes! If I wasn’t talking to that drag boy Haku, I would have made it here in time…maybe I have to jiggle it or something...no harm in trying again.’


Back at the same door again, Sasuke heard a different song by a different artist. Sasuke stood there trying to figure out if he’d heard the song from somewhere.

Oo...Verbal vomit...I keep one on it
Not the scrill but you can call me Ebonics
Sideshows goin’ nutty dumbin’ out
Take the wrong turn and get your roof stomped out
Old school vans doors open, me and my coupe
And some stoners we get high like Shaggy from Scooby Doo
I'm whiskeyed, I'm hit, I ain't go no patience
But I'm a couple tacos short of a combination
Oo...Get on your head like a shovel from the gravel
When them scams dope deals be goin’ south
Look how swivel the metal flower want the fast quarter fuck us for niggas 6 bucks an hour
From the rooter to the tooter He's the driver I'm the shooter
Don't be fuckin’ with my goon
Orgasms, high pots, and trill phones, sidekicks and ring tones
Go hard or go home


‘Nope, never heard it.’

Sasuke inserted the key in the hole for the second time that night, turned, and still nothing. Sasuke happened to look over and notice that his soon-to-be neighbor’s door was cracked open. He went to knock on the door to let the resident know, but canceled his actions when he forgot how loud the music was.

‘Probably won’t hear me anyways.’

Go hard...
Go hard or go home
Go hard...
Go hard or go home
Go hard…
Go hard or go home
Go hard…
Go hard or go home
Go hard…
Go hard or go home
Go hard…
Go hard or go home
Go hard…
Go hard or go home
Go hard…
Go hard or go home


He cracked the door open a little further and peaked his head in. He saw no one, so he continued to push further. When the door was completely open he walked through. He wondered what the hell got in to him that would cause him to walk into someone’s house without permission, when he could have just closed the door himself. But something told him that he had to see who was stupid enough to leave their door unlocked and wide open and who was interested in such a wide variety of music such as himself. He kept walking until he saw a door open with a light on inside so he walked to it. He almost had an aneurism with what he saw. A boy dancing on his bed, brush in hand and eyes closed singing along with the lyrics


Little purp’, cuss like a sayla’
Hamma’ on my waist I'm the 2-man tayla’
Get rich, hate bein’ poow’
My bitch keep askin’ for juicy catow’
In the club, you know we strapped up
Ma’ white tee shirt look like coke wrapped up
Forces n’ jeans, can't wear slacks
Got good hair, no wave cap
smnnuhh (he didn’t know the word) block, standing on the curb
Same niggas with me I been knowin’ since the third
Tryna’ get it, sucks being bummy
Never should've gave you niggas money!” (If you’re black and you’re offended, don’t be. It’s okay he can sing this song…I’m black too : )


Sasuke stood shocked when the boy opened his eyes and flew back off the bed in surprise.

“AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!”

He climbed up off of the floor hands up in an attempt to repel the intruder.

“Look, whatever you want, take it, just don’t kill me!”

He cut the music off and held up the laptop in hopes to waver the intruder from killing him.
'Damn, that's one hot killer.' Naruto thought.

“I’m not here to rob you baka, although it would have been easy, what with you leaving your door open and all.” Sasuke spat.

He lowered the laptop back onto the desk and his hand immediately shot up to the back of his head and scratched along with a sheepish grin.

“Ahh…must’ve been when I took out the trash……..HEY WHO YOU CALLIN’ BAKA?!”

Sasuke stood enraptured with the sight of a shorter, muscular, tan, boy with sunny, bright, spiky, blonde hair. The two bang spikes were longer than the rest of his hair (Like Arashi’s) with a burnt orange headband to match the Charizard on his shirt. Large royal sapphire eyes. And Sure enough, three “whiskers” on each side of his face. Wearing fashionably torn, light colored jeans and a tight bright yellow old school (back when there was only 150 poke’mon) Poke’mon T-shirt.

“Naruto” Sasuke half said half thought.

Naruto’s eyes instantly shot open at the declaration of his name from his intruder and traveled the length of the other boy in his room, then caught a glimpse of his-

“YOU!!”

Sasuke stared blankly.

“You’re that asshole in the hallway I complemented!”

“Oh, that was you dobe? You like my shoes.”

“Liked. E-D, not anymore, now that I know they belong to a-a TEME!”

“Shut up Naruto.”

“Do I even know you?”

“No.”

“Then how do you know my name? Do you go to my school?”

‘If he went to my school, then how in thee hell did I miss a face that gorgeous?!’ Naruto wondered.

“No.”

‘Wait..........nahh…no way’

Sasuke stood waiting for another question when-

*Pardon me my darlin’ but do you have a second
Just so I can tell you how you caught my full attention
Now how is it that you look so well put together flaw-*

Sasuke answered his blackjack cell phone.

“Hello?”

“SASUKE-KUUUUUN!!!”

Sasuke pulled the phone away from his ear and covered the phone with his hand so quickly Naruto wasn’t able to catch what the person on the other end was saying.

After Sasuke was sure Sakura’s highly irritating squeal was over, he raised the phone back up to his ear cautiously.

“-Neji told me you made it into town safely. I’m so glad you’re here! Make sure you come by tomorrow, we have a special gathering we need to discuss before the wedding; it’s kind of a couples thing. Meaning you can’t come alone or it will be really awkward.”

Sasuke let out an inaudible groan.

“Do you have someone special to bring Sasuke?...Ahhh who am I kidding of course you do.”

“Actually I don’t.”

“Ohh…ahh-I-uhh…”

Sakura felt like an insensitive bitch.
“I’m sorry I didn’t know.”

“Of course you didn’t…..The key Neji gave me doesn’t work and he’s…..busy so I’m-“

“Oh? You could come stay over-“

Sasuke’s premonition allowed him to hastily cut Sakura off from her expected invitation.
“No Thanks Sakura, I’ll find a hotel or something.”

Naruto’s eyes widened.

“Sakura?”

Sasuke looked over at Naruto with a questioning gaze.

“Let me see that!” Naruto mildly demanded, rushing up to Sasuke to snatch the phone.

Naruto put the phone up to his ear and shivered from the warmth of the phone from being pressed up against Sasuke's ear.

“Sakura-chan?” Naruto asked.

“…Na-Naruto?!”

Naruto walked back to the side of the bed and gracelessly plopped down; his shirt riding up from the drop to the bed exposing a set of washboard tan abs, a white beaded belly ring and an odd black swirl tattoo surrounding his navel.

‘Hmm….rebel!’ Sasuke sarcastically thought to himself.


Naruto spotted Sasuke’s starchy stance and patted the bed for him to take a seat; phone still in-hand every so often giving a half-hearted response.

Sasuke looked at him and his stomach and sat at the very edge of the bed.

‘If I sit any closer…’ Sasuke thought.


“So Naruto, how do you know Sasuke?”

“WHAT?” Naruto exclaimed before hanging up in Sakura’s ear and pointing an accusing finger.

“YOU’RE SASUKE UCHIHA?! IN MY HOUSE RIGHT NOW?!”

“Technically apartment, but yes.” Sasuke replied simply.

‘No.Way.’ Naruto thought shocked.

Naruto lowered his head in reminiscence of the fantasies he’d had directly after Kiba enlightened him about Sasuke and his cheeks heated.

“What’s the big deal? And why are you blushing dobe?”

Naruto whipped his head up at the insult he hadn’t received in years to see pale skin, coal black eyes and blue-black hair in an oddly sexy cut, where the back was spiked and his bangs straight and jaw-length separated by a part directly down the center of his crown. A stoic teenager stared down condescendingly at Naruto.

“LOOK! YOU-YOU FUCKING TEME! YOU JUST HELLA BROKE INTO MY HOUSE AND THEN CALL ME A DOBE?! WHAT THE HELL?!” Naruto exclaimed.

“Hella?”

“I’m originally from California”

“Ahhh…” Sasuke nodded knowingly.

*Pardon me my darlin’ but do you have a second
Just so I can tell you how you caught my full attent-*

Sasuke picked up his phone.

“Hello?...Sasuke?....Naruto?”

“What Sakura?” Sasuke asked sourly.

“Did Naruto’s dumb ass hang up on me?”

“Yeah.”

“I heard that Sakura!”

Sasuke fought off a giggle.

‘Since when do I want to giggle? What the fuck?’

Sakura didn’t have much luck with the struggle and let out a girlish giggle.

“Hahaha, well, I was wondering where you were going to stay.”

The phone’s volume was up loud enough Naruto could have heard Sai fart in the next room and once again snatched the phone from Sasuke.

“He can stay here with me!”

Sasuke looked taken aback.

‘I don’t even know you! I could be a killer for all you know!’

“Well….that would be convenient…let me talk to Sasuke.”

“Kay, bye Sakura-chan!”

Naruto handed the phone back to Sasuke smiling widely.

Sasuke was so occupied with the smile Naruto gave him, to realize that he was in possession of the phone again and Sakura was talking to him.

“Sasuke?....SASUKE-KUN?!”

“…Huh?”

“What do you think?”

“About what?”

“About staying with Naruto, baka!”

“…Huh? Oh. No.” Sasuke said flatly.

Naruto’s heart sank; he was hoping Sasuke would stay, so they could get to know each other better. Plus, he needed the company.

Sasuke looked over at Naruto’s downcast gaze in time to see him run a hand through his fashionably disheveled hair and unknowingly lick his bottom lip displaying an inhumanly long pierced tongue and nodding his head in acknowledgement of his rejection.
Sasuke felt something stirring in the bottom of his abdomen.

‘REWIND!.......WHAT THE FUCK!!’ Sasuke thought surprised.

“Okay well, although I thought it’d be better for you to stay, give me a call when you figure out where you’re staying okay?”

Sasuke sat frozen still staring at Naruto’s closed mouth.

Naruto looked up at the silence and watched Sasuke.

‘What the heck is he staring at?’

“…”

“Sasuke-kun?!”

“…yeah…”

Without waiting for a reply Sasuke hung up.

“I’ve got to go.”
Sasuke stood with full intentions of leaving when Naruto grabbed his wrist before he could walk out the door.

“Wait, why don’t you stay with me?” Naruto added a childish “Pleeeeeeeaaaseeee?” to avert attention from his desperateness; like it was a joke; secretly hoping he would accept his second invitation.

Sasuke turned slowly, Naruto’s grip still strong on his wrist.

“I mean, I think we should get to know each other since we’ll both be going to Sai’s wedding and all. Plus we both have to go over there tomorrow and we’ll be there at the same time….”Naruto continued to babble while Sasuke glanced down at his wrist and he felt his cheeks heat.

‘SINCE WHEN DO I BLUSH?!’

With that, he wrenched his wrist free of Naruto’s grip and crossed his arms over his chest.

“Why do you want me to stay so badly?”

Naruto wrung his hands and quietly answered.
“Well, it’sbeenawhilesinceI’vehadanyoneoversoiwantsomecompany.”

‘Neji was right, he is cute…..but still an idiot.'
“Fine.”

Naruto inwardly cheered when he heard Sasuke agree.

“Okay!”
Naruto looked around.
“You don’t have any bags?”

“No.”

“…”

“Moving truck.”

“...ahh I see. Well are you hungry?”

“Sure.”

“Do you like Seafood Alfredo? I made some earlier…. I cook when I get bored ….really, how gay can one get?” Naruto chuckled at his own comment.

‘Gay?’

They walked together towards the kitchen.

“Sure sounds good.” Sasuke finally answered.

Naruto headed to the fridge, opened it, and bended slightly to move things out of the way from the Alfredo. While Sasuke seated himself at a mini-bar facing the kitchen. Sasuke tried his hardest to look away but found himself staring at Naruto’s jean clad ass.

‘Please be…’ Sasuke finished his thought joking with himself.

Naruto finally pulled out a large black pot and retrieved two medium sized bowls and two spoons to scoop out some of its contents into. He threw the two bowls into the microwave for a few minutes and took a seat next to Sasuke at the bar.
Naruto sat thinking about his new guest.

“Ne, how did you know my name anyways?”

“I could say the same.”

“Well, I heard rumors.”

“Oh?” Sasuke looked amused.

“Not bad though.”

“Of course not.” Sasuke said sarcastically which Naruto questioned in his mind why.

“You?”

“Same.”

“Really? What’d they say? How sexy I am?....*siiighhh* I know…. I can’t help it.” Naruto gave a faraway look as he held out his hand and admired his fingernails.

Sasuke rolled his eyes.

“Well?”

“You know, Hyuuga Neji?”

“Yeah, I know him. He’s in a couple of my classes-well was.”

“He told me about you.”

“Ahh…my friend Kiba told me about you. He made you out to be some big-shot celebrity….but you don’t look all that special to me.” Naruto lied.

Sasuke inwardly smiled.

The microwave timer went off and Naruto served the meal with cold tea.

“I’m glad you feel that way dobe……Who’s Kiba?”

Naruto ignored the insult.
“You don’t know him.”

Sasuke asked in his mind.
‘How do you know?!’

“How old are you?” Naruto asked.

“Eighteen.”

‘Sweet.’ Naruto thought.
“Ahh…me too……Are you single?”

Sasuke tensed.
“What is this? Twenty Questions or something?!”

“Well, if so, that’s only two, eighteen more to go! I just want to get to know you is all, calm down.”

“Yes.”

“Cool, me too.”

‘Cool? Cool as in, I’m-single-too-so-we-should-get-together cool?’

Sasuke and Naruto ate their food wondering.

“I’m actually looking. I’m tired of being single. I’m ready to give my love to someone forever!” Naruto half joked.

“Yeah…I want a serious relationship too.” Sasuke agreed.

“We should look together! Like at the wedding or something, there’s always single searching people at weddings.”

“That kind of stuff is for desperate people Naruto. I’d rather meet a bo-partner another way.”

Naruto sat stunned.
‘….was he going to say…?’

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