The Return Of Uzumaki Dandji

hi again. i am soo sorry for the late release, i could come with a bunch of lameass excusses, but i wont kill your time with that.

reveiw time, if you wanna go on with the story rather than read my reweiv answers, its just below.

from 24CaratCoal
Okay, I'm totally willing to Beta/Edit for you, I just need to know where to send the chapters to is all. So, I'll get started on the editing and I'll let you decide how you want things done. Though I would like to know a bit more about Dandji as a person- though that can be done through e-mail to avoid spoilers.
"yay, a beta:D sorry about not sending the new chapter to edditing, but i dont really know where to send it to -.-' my email is ubisoft.mig@jubii.dk" (to everyone, i just realeshed my email, if you absue this and spam me, you will die)

from Sneakyfox
hehe.. nice chapter!


Also, I find it completely unacceptable that you can not buy ramen in Denmark. Feel free to send my your address via email (I censor this for no good reason:D) and I'll send you ramen. My god. Ramenless... I did not think such a thing was possible.
"aww, thanks for the thought, but i dont want to be a bother." (i am going on vacation soon, i will snoop it up in itally, i hope)

from Cyraxr
Another interesting chapter and I say go for Tayuya. If Dandji wants to help Hinata and Naruto get together he should have Hinata train with Naruto. And the fox should be trying to push Naruto towards Hinata like her demon is trying to push her to Naruto. On Naruto's jutsu what no sexy jutsu? Signed a fan of Hinata, Tayuya, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
"well, one of my first aiders was to have them train together, then i thought how am i going to puh her into jinchuuken training? i'll give her a demon:D and don't you worry, kyuubi will get going soon. and you are forgetting, Naruto did not make that one up til the just before the 3. th exam, we only just had the 2.nd"

It's so nice that people actually keep reweiving:D it keeps the hope up.

The return of Uzumaki Dandji. Chapter 3

Disclaimer: I do not own, will ever own nor have ever owned Naruto, just face it, if I did would I be writing fanfics?
I don’t own the characters of this fic except for one, I made him up in my twisted little head.
And I might have taken a few ideas from fanfic authors that I have read and like, sorry about that (sweat drop)

I also messed up some facts to make the story more believable. No like no read.

“stuff” = speaking.
(stuff) = authors comment.
`stuff´ = thinking.
*stuff* = demon speak.


Hinata’s POV.

Hinata was crying in her bed, her dad had been crueler that usually, even going so far as to slap her across her face. Her cheek burned with pain, but her heart was giving her en even harder time.
*there, there little one, don’t mind him, he is only being a jackass against you because of me, I am so sorry.*
“Who are you!? Why are you in my head?” *calm down little one, yelling won’t do you any good* “I don’t care!” *you will when your father finds you seemingly talking to yourself* that made Hinata calm down. *just think it and I’ll hear it* `ok, now who are you?´ *I am… I m sorry to say, sealed inside you* `what?´ *poor little thing, I am the Shichibi, the seven tailed cat Bijuu*
“WHAT!!!?” Hinata gasped. *I have been sealed inside you for your entire life, watching what you did and what happened to you. I am so sorry, everyone is mean against you because they are fools that think you are me, even though I am not a bad person.*
`You’re a demon, who can you not be bad?´ *see, I figured you might not believe me, but still I am honestly sorry for causing this for you, and my previous holders.*
`Pervious holders?, what do you mean?´ *I have been sealed in a different holder each time the old died, from any reason, I was sealed in other. Haven’t been free to walk the earth for the past 500 years.*
Hinata felt a sadness from the demon overwhelm her. Hinata could not even imagine having being imprisoned for so long, having to watch at the person that was doomed from birth, to be your keeper, being hurt because of you.
`I actually feel sorry for a demon´ *thanks* `What?´ *there is nothing you think that escapes me* *and sorry for freaking you out at the ramen store, but I can see you really like him*
`That was you? Please don’t do that, its embarrassing.´
*I’ll try not to, but come on, you know you want to.* `well… yes´

Hinata’s encounter with the demon had actually cheered her up, she got up from the bed and headed outside again, knowing her father would be pissed, she snuck out.
*getting bold are you?* `I just wanna train a little tonight´ *don’t explain to me, I’d take any excuse to get away from your family.* Hinata sighed and knew the demon was right.

Time skip no jutsu.

Hinata was sneaking home, the sun would rise in a few hours and she was beat from training. *you’re getting stronger, I am proud of you. Someone at the end of the hall, hide!*
Hinata was taken aback from the warning, but quickly hid in the closest door, that happened to be a broom closet. `Thank god for perfectly placed obvious hiding places´ *I know what you mean, glad I could help* `thank you for the warning demon-san… do you have a other name I can call you by? Demon just seems a little degrading.´ Hinata felt a sudden surge of happiness and confusion.
*no one ever thought of calling anything else, I appreciate your concern. My name is Kaku.*
`Nice to meet you Kaku-san´ Hinata send the thought with a smile. Before she snuck in to her room again.

Dandji’s POV.

Dandji was walking home with Naruto over his shoulder, he was taking this as expected, this was why exactly he wanted to wait till he passed his exam a year from now to tell him. Well ok, wearing him out till he was nearly out properly wasn’t the smartest move to do just before he found out.
It was kind of late, and he saw someone training on the field next to where he and Naruto had trained. `Who is out training so late?´ He snuck over and saw the girl that had a crush on his nephew, Hinata was it? Yea. Doesn’t seem all that strong, but she got the will for it, there is potential.
He snuck away again, wanting to get Naruto home so he could get some rest; weekend training was far from over.

Time skip no jutsu.

Dandji was getting up, having his morning shower, and prepared breakfast. At the smell of fresh ramen Naruto got up too.
They ate in silence, Naruto seemed in a dark place without thought, he even ate his ramen slowly.
“Why!?” Naruto suddenly shouted. He was clearly angry, and Dandji could feel Kyuubi’s chakra fuelling just below Naruto’s skin. `Incredible, he can already call out its chakra, the seal has determinate faster than expected. This is either very good, or really bad.´
“Calm down Naruto, there is no use getting angry over it.” “like you care, what am I to you? Demon breed?” Dandji looked shocked at Naruto, but didn’t really blame him; he had been mistreated from birth for this, so he had no real reason to trust him.
“I don’t hate you for it, for one, there is a few like me, such as the 3.rd, your teacher Iruka and most your classmates.”
“They do hate me, they ignore my existence and wont see me as a person” Naruto was at the verge of breaking down, and Dandji knew this. “every adult in Konoha knows about the demon, but the most think that you are not you, but the demon you carry. The people that know this is wrong and those that don’t know don’t hate you. Some of the kids do avoid you, but only because their parents told them to, not giving a reason”
“Why would they not give a reason? They hate me” “They do indeed, but the 3.rd placed a S-ranking order that no one was to speak of the demon within you, punishable by lifetime imprisonment”
Naruto gave a dumbstruck expression “why?” “to give you a chance, he unlike the 4.th knew that the people of the village would hate you, so to give you a chance with the next generation, they where not allowed to know”
“What? The 4.th, why did he not realise?” “he wanted you to be a hero, the brave container of the demon, the one that should sacrifice his own well being to save the rest, and do internal battle with the demon as long as he shall live”
“Internal battle?” Naruto asked with growing fear. Dandji answered with a lowered head.
“The demon’s chakra is to great to seal by anyone, the seal will not hold forever, it has already fallen to a point where she can talk to you”
“She?” Naruto was mildly confused by that, but he was calming down all the same.
“The Bijuu are all female” Dandji said matter-of-factly.
“Ok”, Naruto was clearly going through the information he had received. “wait, you said punishable with lifetime imprisonment, wont you get in trouble?”
“Like all laws there is a few exceptions, the rule don’t affect you, so you are free to tell anyone you’d like to know, but I don’t think you’ll tell anyone anytime soon. And a law cannot work with back working execution, and I wasn’t in the village when it was made, so I am free of it.”
“Where were you?” Naruto asked with scientism.
“A year before the attack I was sent on a long term mission, I returned a few days ago, everyone thought I was dead. So showing up after 12 and a half year kind of shook those that remember me up a little.”
“Wait, you got send on a long-term mission at age what, five?”
“What? Do I look so young? I am almost 29” Naruto’s jaw hit the floor hard. “Impossible, you don’t even look a full 18 yet.” “Freaky right? I don’t age normally; I looked like a 9 year old kid till I got 12, and then made a growth spurt so I looked 15 in 6 months. Normally grew to how I look now and just stopped.” Naruto looked a little odd from that piece of information, but shrugged it off as just being wired.
“Now come on, we still got training to do before weekend is over.” Naruto looked shocked yet again, “you still want to make me stronger when you know I am a demon?” “Naruto, I knew from the minute I spoke with the 3.rd, just after I got back to Konoha. And I still asked to be your guardian, not because of the demon, but because I care, no one should be all alone, its just plain wrong.” “Wait, you asked to be my guardian?” “why yes I did” `the fact I am your freaking uncle made it kind of hard to deny me too´ Dandji thought with an inner smirk.
“you more calm now?” “Yeah” Naruto sighed, clearly still feeling rather bad about the whole thing.
“good, then could you might indulge me as to why you had burns and scorch marks all over you yesterday after training” “I don’t really know” Dandji didn’t totally believe that “it had happened before, I just don’t know why” “well I have a theory, but first I need you to tell me exactly what happens when you draw on your chakra, does it sting or burn?”
Naruto looked at the floor, not really wanting to admit it hurt to do even the most basic jutsu. “yeah” he whispered in a small voice.

Dandji did a quick series of handseals, muttering something under his breath, and his eyes changed to a greenish colour. “Gather you chakra in your hands, I am gonna take a look see”
Naruto hesitantly brought his hands together and started funnelling chakra to his hands, much like he would a seal. Dandji watched in awe as Naruto’s powerful chakra ripped him apart in a cellular level. “Stop That!” he yelled. Naruto stopped what he did abruptly, looking like a frightened child, he had never heard Dandji either yell or use such stern a tone. Dandji looked at his frightened nephew and sighed, “sorry Naruto, but you where hurting yourself more than you think, my theory was correct, but to an extent far above what I imagined, how the hell did you put up whit that? Must have hurt like hell.” Naruto’s eyes grew wide in shock “was it that bad?” “That bad? That bad?! You where literally ripping yourself apart”
Naruto was shocked from the outburst to say the least “ripping… myself… apart?”
“yes” Dandji nodded to clear his statement. “I had a clue as to this, but its much worse than I imagined, you would properly have crippled yourself had you not been healing so fast.”
Naruto’s stare went wide, as he fell on his ass. Unable to phantom the fact that using simple academy level jutsu, was indeed killing him slowly.
“Let me explain, you know that chakra is made from a blend of physical and spiritual power, right?”
Naruto did not reply, just starring into space.
“NARUTO!!” Dandji yelled of full force, snapping Naruto back to the real of the living.
“Yes?” “Listen to me, you are aware that chakra is made from a blend of spiritual and physical energy right?” Naruto looked like I ghost. “Do you ever listen at the academy?” “Sometimes…”
“Ok, I’ll give you the quick resume, to form chakra in your body you need 2 energies, spiritual and physical, with me so far?” Naruto nodded meekly. “the spiritual energy comes from your soul, and is strengthened by meditation, chakra practice and willpower. The physical comes from your body and is strengthened by physical training, body mass and muscle.”
Dandji gave Naruto a moment to gasp what he said “I understand so far” came Naruto’s response.
Dandji smiled and continued. “Right now, your spiritual power is far greater than your physical power, so when you draw chakra, the spiritual sucks strength from your cells in greater amounts than they can give, and are therefore damaged and destroyed.” Naruto was getting the picture; one sucking from the other so hard it broke.
“So, right now if you use chakra your body rips itself apart.” Naruto was shocked to hear that he could not use his chakra anymore; it was a part of him just like his arms or legs.
“there is only two things we can do in this situation, one is to wait for you to grow older before training you any further, so you grow a larger body mass.” Naruto looked horrified, no training? Then he would never become hokage.
Dandji gave Naruto a look saying `shut up I am not done´ “or, we could suspend your chakra training and focus on your physical shape, thereby increasing your physical power and giving balance to your energies, although it will admittedly take longer to make you stronger without chakra in your physical training. Choice is yours.”
Naruto gave Dandji a knowing smile, “guess what I pick”


Naruto’s POV.

Naruto followed his new guardian to the training field for the second time in two days, he had already chosen to accept him, he was nice, he was strong, he had humour, he was willing to train him and he knew about the Kyuubi and couldn’t care less. The perfect adult, why did Naruto trust him? He had no clue, he was sure he lied about his name, he had seeked him out knowing about the Kyuubi, maybe he wanted to turn him into a weapon? Naruto honestly didn’t know, but he didn’t think so. And he couldn’t care less, the man seemed strangely familiar, Naruto just couldn’t place why though.
But anyhow, he was here again, he knew he had a Demon sealed in his gut, was with a strangely familiar person that wanted to train him, and he couldn’t use his chakra. Yep that kind of sums up his current situation.
“ok Naruto. To start off I need to check out how much you can do. I need to know where I am working from.” `That seems fair enough´ Naruto thought to himself. *I agree* `what?´ *It’s just me baka* `hey, give me a break. I am not used to demons in my head.´ *ok, ok. Just don’t get a calf on me.* `huh?´ “NARUTO! We’re training here.” “ohh, sorry Dandji-sensei” “its okay” Dandji sighed. “just start running, as fast as you can.”
Naruto started stretching his limbs, not wanting to twist or sprain anything. “how good of you to remember, but we are trying to make a real situation. Preparation is forbidden.” Naruto shrugged, sure that Dandji knew what he was doing. And then started running, slow at first and then slowly accelerated towards his max. “Idiot! You have to start at fast. If not, you’re a sitting duck.” Naruto went on a spree of speed, accelerating from 8 km/h to a good 19 km/h in 3 seconds. “Better, but your accelerating is to slow, you need to get from still to fast in no time flat. Or you’ll never be able to dodge at a seconds notice.” Naruto took the wisdom in, speeding up to above humanly possible. (That is around 22 km/h, you seen Naruto, you know they move faster than that.)
Naruto was moving at 26 km/h when he finally collapsed. “Good, your top speed is 26 km/h, and your max running time is 24 seconds. An ok basis, but you need to improve. You get a minutes rest before you get the next test.”
A minute later Naruto got up again, and Dandji walked over to him with a odd looking pole. “take thin on between your shoulders, I am going to apply more weight on it to see how much you can take.” Naruto nodded and placed the rod so he could lift with his whole body. A second after he got his stance right, the pole started weighing more, he fought it till he couldn’t hold it anymore and he collapsed. As he fell the whole weight disappeared from the pole, witch got light as a feather once again. “Good, you can take 58 kg. with your body. Room for improvement” `That is more then I weigh´ Naruto silently thought to himself. “Now for agility, you do some exercises I name and I grade your from there.” Naruto did his best to do what he was told, but most of the things he didn’t even know what where, so Dandji had to explain and demonstrate them first. “Ok. You’re a little below average in agility. We need to train that most. 10 minuets break, then we start training.”

10 minuets later.

Naruto had been lying on his back staring at the sky in his break, just trying to regain his breath. When he heard something drop next to him, he snapped up and saw it was a piece of cloth. “It’s a weighted training belt, wear it at all time, except in the bath. It can’t handle getting to wet.” Naruto grapped the stash looking cloth and pulled it up, it weighted much more than it seemed by its looks. “lesson one, never judge on appearance. That can weight anywhere from 1 to 50 kg.” “how?” Naruto asked in wonder. “it is a chakra absorbent material, the more chakra posted into it, the more it weighs. I’ll add some more weight when you adjust to the 5 kg that is has now.”
Naruto nodded meekly, and then he put it on. “Under the jacket, lesson two, always seem weaker than you are. It makes it easier to surprise your opponents. Plus, its great fun to look at your friends faces then you all of a sudden drop 40 kg and start moving twice as fast” Dandji added that last part with a playful grin. “so, you got weights on to?” “of course” “how much?” “if I told you that, it would be no fun when I drop it, will it now?” Naruto giggled slightly at that. “now start running laps, we’re starting on your endurance. Then you can outlast your opponents in combat.”
Naruto started running, he kept a rather high pace, and he started out running fast. He had listened before. After roughly 70 minuets of running Naruto was worn down. “Dandji-sensei, I can’t keep running much more.” He almost gasped out. “Good, that means this is the part of the training that pays off, keep at it” Naruto was mildly confused at Dandji’s words, but kept going nonetheless. Naruto keeps running for a few minuets till he finally gasped “I can’t keep going.” “if you got enough energy to talk, you have plenty to run.” Dandji’s coldness was pissing off Naruto. He keeps running, and oddly it was a little easier than before. That calmed him down and he kept going, only to get this new energy cut right off again. `What!? I just got more energy, and now its gone?´ *its your anger. Humans can convert anger to energy. But is commonly lost to the rage it causes.* `I don’t get it.´ *the true power of humans are their emotions, you can draw power from any emotion, but it is easiest with anger.* `might as well try it´ Naruto got himself all worked up, running on his newfound anger. He kept going for a good 10 minuets before he collapsed on the ground. *That is the draw back, your body stops some of its signals. So you can’t feel how tired you are, nor how much it hurts.*
Naruto was lying on his stomach on the ground, unable to even get up or turn around. “Brilliant Naruto, you did what is physically impossible for you to do. I’ll explain when you recover some.”
The world got dark…

Some time later, Naruto’s eyes fluttered open, he could see leafs. He then turned his head, it was a harder task than he originally expected. His body seemed to ace and burn all over.
“Ahh, you’re finally awake? You have been out cold for a few hours.” Naruto recognised the voice as Dandji’s. “Ooh” Naruto moaned, unable to get up. “Hey, hey easy there champ. You just overextended your body’s capability with 12%. That is quite an accomplishment for someone without ¨breach¨ training.” Naruto moaned loudly. “What is breach training?” “Let me explain. Your body has a limit as to how much it can do. Like your top speed or how much you can lift.”
“Ok, I follow you so far.” “Good, now breach training is the concept of breaking the limit, as you can lift 58 kg, but then you burst up with even more power, and for en instance lift 60kg. From the starting exercises I had you do, I calculated your limits, and you recently broke how long you can possibly run by 12%. Its rather impressive that you did it on your first try, normally it takes a few weeks of training before a breach is made, you did it in first go.” “So, I did good?” Naruto did not know why he so desperately wanted Dandji to be proud of him, he barely knew him and still he wanted him to recognise and praise him. “You did great.” Naruto believed his words, it was just something in his voice that sounded sincere.
Then something hit Naruto like a sack of bricks. *I was wondering when you’d remember* Naruto jumped to his feet, when he clearly hadn’t recovered enough to be doing any movements. He fell to his knees, but still stammered. “Dandji, I have a Kawarimi test this Friday.” (Replacement jutsu, I will use the Japanese names)
“WHAT!?!” Dandji was clearly upset about this. “You can’t do it; it’s just not possible to train your body to that level in just 4 days.” “I can, I just did breach on the first try, its no problem” “I don’t think you understand Naruto. If you should have to over exceed yourself by 75 % of your physical total a day, and I mean up it from today to tomorrow, then the new limit must be exceeded by 75 % and so on so forth.” Naruto looked shocked at the new development. “Then I just have to bear the pain.” “NO! Absolutely not, if you use your chakra ANY more before you get strong enough, the damage will be permanent. And you’d never be able to be a shinobi.”
Naruto sat back, getting more and more angry. The kyuubi’s chakra almost bubbling out.
“Then what do you suggest?”
“You may not be able to use your on chakra, but… there should be no problem using… the kyuubi’s!”
(Dun, Dun Dunnnn)

-- Somewhere far into Konoha’s forests --

Strangers POV.

`Why? Why is it so dark? It’s so cold, why?´ it was all that was going through the girls head. Over and over again, she had only been there for a split second in reality, but to her it was so much more.
`Is that? I see it, its light! It’s the end of the cold dark´ She thought with ecstasy. She had never been so happy to get out of the dark.
She entered the light, and as soon as she did. She was soaked, wet and cold, but there was the light. She couldn’t breath, she tried but all that came in was water. `Why? Why is this happening?´
She heard a loud splash. `Am I dead? What is happening?´ she is finally able to open her eyes, she is in a strange forest. Tall trees all around, she is lying next to a lake. Did she come from the lake? Right now she didn’t care, only one thing on her mind. `Mom!´
She fanatically looked around, searching for her mother. There in the lake. She got up and ran to the water, even though her legs refused to bear her she still went. “Mommy!”
“I’m sorry sweetie; I guess I couldn’t use that jutsu just yet.” The older woman said as she closed her eyes for the last time. “Mommy! NO!” She laid over her mothers upper body, it being severed in the middle her legs missing and nowhere in sight. She started crying, just crying the night away.


ANBU captain’s POV.

`What was that?´ the captain stopped, signalling her group to follow her.
The group arrived at a lakeside. `Nothing unusual here… Wait, who is that.´
By the lakeside was a small being crying over what seemed to be half a corpse. “Identify yourself!” yelled the captain. It did no such thing, just laid there, sobbing over a corpse. The captain gave silent orders to her group, width they started doing as soon as they where given.
Two of the men quickly grasped the girl and chained her in-between two trees adding seal notes to the chains. And the last ran to the body, picking it up for further investigation. “Be wary of the little one, it might have done this to her.” The small being started moving shouting “no, Mother! Give her back”.
The ANBU team left, leaving the little girl to fend for herself, chained up in the forest.

End of chapter 3. hope you liked it.
this is where i would put spoilers, but i am to lazy to do that:D (meaning i dont know what is going to happen on the next chapter yet)