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By: hColleen
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 4
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Dondengaeshi

どんでん返し

Dawn found a somewhat different scene. Clothes were still scattered around the normally clean room. The bottle of lotion was still on its side, but now shoved under the bed. The boys were still sleeping, but through the night, they had moved. Naruto still was on his back, but now, he was half way turned onto his side. Sasuke, however, had moved more. Instead of laying nestled on Naruto’s chest, he lay to his side, curled up, his legs tangled around one of Naruto’s as his head was tucked under the blonde’s chin. His arm was draped across the body under him and Naruto was turned up slightly to hold him close.

The blonde scrunched up his face, trying to sort out the myriad of impressions that began to assault his returning consciousness. His leg was trapped in an awkward position, there was weight on his body, he was naked…and he hurt somewhere he hadn’t hurt since Kakashi taught him to not let an enemy behind him. He wriggled slightly, and this caused the weight on his chest to tighten and drew a groan from the one on top of him. This caused a frown to cross the blonde’s lips, his eyes still closed. It was just a dream…wasn’t it? Slowly, he cracked on eye, scanning the room. It wasn’t his. That much was sure. The wall color was wrong and it was bigger. Opening his other eye, he looked downwards, only to be halted when his chin ran into an immovable object. He moved his eyes and tipped his head to the side. No…not a dream…Sasuke was sleeping on him, curled around him. A smile touched his lips as he tightened his arms around the sleeping brunet. He sighed as Sasuke began to move, curling a little tighter and groaning before he opened his eyes and took in the environment around him.

“Naruto?” Sasuke asked as he brought his head up, his voice thick with sleep.

“Yeah…” the blonde answered, a tingle of fear creeping into his mind.

“Why are you here?” his voice now confused.

Naruto’s heart sank and he wished the floor would open beneath him so that he could follow it. “You invited me over yesterday.”

Sasuke frowned. He woke up feeling safe, warm, content. Why was he screwing it up now? He could see the hurt in Naruto’s eyes. It hurt him, but he couldn’t stop. “You stayed?”

Naruto was beginning to become angry, “Yeah, bastard, I stayed.” He pushed the dark haired boy away from him. “What did you want me to do? Leave right after you screwed me? Or were you gonna pay me? Cause if you were, you sure as hell forgot. Or was ramen supposed to be payment? Is that what I am to you, some kind of whore?” He struggled to his feet, ignoring the shooting pain that nearly blinded him as he did.

This was all wrong…this wasn’t what was supposed to happen! “Naruto…” Sasuke began, only to be cut off by the blonde who sounded like he might be crying.

“No, stop, Sasuke. I don’t want to hear any more. Thanks for last night, but I really could have done without this morning.” He turned away from the dark haired boy and began looking for his clothes. He came very close to laying the Uchiha heir out when the boy’s arms wrapped around him. The only thing that stopped him was a suspicious wetness on his shoulder. And Sasuke’s lips were against his skin, igniting the fires of the night before despite his confused and roiled up emotions. He tried to growl, but found the noise coming out wrong, more of a sigh.

“I’m sorry, Naruto. That wasn’t what I meant,” Sasuke whispered.

Struggling to hang onto his anger, the blonde demanded, “What did you mean, then?”

“I thought you would be disgusted with me for loosing control…for pushing you too far…for taking advantage of you.”

Naruto relaxed against the brunet, “It’s not like I put up a fight or anything.”

Sasuke brought his body closer to Naruto’s, hugging the blonde closer, “No, you didn’t. You were rather delicious.” He bent down and began kissing the tan shoulders of the one he held.

“Now what, Sasuke?” the blonde asked. He knew that would probably end the flirting, but he had to know.

The brunet paused. He hadn’t considered the question. In his fantasies, it’d never come up. But, this wasn’t a fantasy. This was real. He had really slept with what had to be his best friend. Now what, indeed? Softly, he admitted, “I don’t know.”

Naruto’s head dropped forward, his eyes closing. “Do you want it to just be last night and we go on as if nothing happened? Do you wanna go out? What? Tell me what you want, Sasuke.”

Naruto’s body was tense, trembling as Sasuke continued to hold him. He felt the blonde’s fists at his sides as the boy struggled for control, waiting for Sasuke to determine their future. He stepped away watching as the blonde’s shoulders tensed, but what he had to say had to be said eye to eye. Actually, he wasn’t quite sure what he wanted to say, only that he had to look at Naruto’s face.

Sasuke stepped around the shaking blonde, looking him over from head to foot. The blue eyes were focused on the ground, not visible to Sasuke, nor was the rest of the blonde’s face. He could guess what it looked like, contorted in tension and concentration. Naruto’s shoulders rode high, almost covering his ears, ready to defend the delicate organs from potentially harsh words. That tension coursed through the trembling body, ready to fight, should it be needed. Sasuke reached up to lift the boy’s eyes to meet his. It hurt him more than he cared for when Naruto flinched, but he didn’t stop. There was pain and pleading in those blue eyes. Those eyes begged for him to not leave, but were prepared, or were trying to be prepared, for anything. Sasuke’s heart caught in his throat. Gently, he cupped the blonde’s round cheek, and brought their lips together lightly.

Naruto shoved the brunet away. “I didn’t say kiss me, bastard! I asked what you want. Tell me!!”

“I…I never thought about that,” Sasuke answered, his voice soft.

“I didn’t ask you to think,” Naruto countered. He couldn’t take much more of this. The suspense, the not knowing, was going to kill him. “Sasuke, what do you want for us? Is there even an ‘us’ to think about?” His eyes glared into the black ones across from him.

Sasuke’s eyes reflected the blonde’s pain. He turned to the side, “I…I…I would like there to be an ‘us,’”

Naruto’s voice was soft as he asked, “Really?”

Sasuke’s eyes returned to the blue ones, amazed at the hope written in them. “Yeah, really,” his voice soft, but confident. The joy that crossed the blonde’s face was almost blinding, but quickly followed by worry. “What is it, Naruto?”

Naruto looked away, “What do we tell everyone? What about those who will hate me more for…”

Sasuke cut him off, “We tell them what they need to know and only those who need to know. And they will not hate you more, idiot.”

“Don’t call me ‘idiot,’ and they will…” His words were again cut off, but this time by the feel of arms wrapping around his body, reminding him that they both were still as naked as they had been when they’d fallen asleep.

“What matters more to you, Naruto, what they think or what I think?”

With a sigh, Naruto let go of his worries and wrapped his arms around Sasuke, “What you think, bastard.” He squeaked when Sasuke pinched him. “What was that for?” he demanded, pulling back from the pale boy.

“You don’t want me to call you ‘idiot,’ don’t call me ‘bastard.’”

Naruto stuck his tongue out to have it claimed by the other, bitten lightly before being drawn into Sasuke’s mouth. A slight battle ensued, both boys groaning and drawing the other closer, as their tongues sought dominance over the kiss. Feeling mischievous, Naruto slid his hand down Sasuke’s back, slipping it between his lower cheeks and pressing lightly against the opening his fingers found there. Surprise allowed him to win the battle as Sasuke groaned deeply. He was surprised at the depth of that groan, however, feeling it rumble up the pale body he held, seeming to start from his questing fingers. Curiously, he pressed again, a little more firmly. Another moan, arising from deep within the body he held answered his efforts. He could also feel Sasuke relaxing in to their kiss, seeming to melt against him. Unfortunately, the added weight also reminded him of the pain in his lower back. Reluctantly, he drew his hand up and wrapped it around Sasuke’s waist. Gently, after another moment of savoring the feel of the Uchiha heir’s mouth, he pulled back from their kiss slowly. “Ne, Sasuke, could we take a bath, maybe?”

It took Sasuke a moment to recover his bearings, having been lost in the sensations and feelings the blonde evoked in him. Slowly, remembered how Naruto had moved, as if he were in extreme pain. “I hurt you?”

“No,” the blonde countered, cutting himself off before he could utter the overly familiar insult, “I want a bath.” He would not be weak, and he would not allow Sasuke to feel guilty. The pain was fading, anyways, and…he did want a bath.

One of the benefits of the house was, in the back, there was a small hot spring. It was to this rather than the indoor bathing room Sasuke led the blonde. Naruto’s eyes were wide as he took in the high walls blocking out the view of anyone who lived near by, the artfully planted and kept trees and shrubs. The clean raked sand and rock garden and fish pond completed the traditional yard. In the back corner, over a small foot bridge over the pond was the spring. Even though the day wasn’t cold, the water steamed gently within the surrounding rocks. To one side was an elevated tap with a bench standing next to it. Several towels were folded neatly on the far end of the bench and nearer the tap was a small bucket for washing one’s self before entering the water. When Naruto paused to take this all in, Sasuke took his hand and led him to the bench, encouraging him to kneel. “C’mon, you wanted a bath, right?”

Naruto pulled Sasuke down beside him, “Yeah, and you need one!” He turned on the water, filled the bucket, and dumped it over Sasuke’s head, grinning as the brunet spluttered. Growling, Sasuke launched himself at the blonde, tackling him to the ground with his head under the still running water. Now, Naruto spluttered as he pushed and rolled over, pinning Sasuke beneath him. Unfortunately, the water was now out of reach and it took both hands to hold the squirming brunet down. Sasuke maneuvered his legs around Naruto’s and flipped them so that Naruto was back under the running water. Deciding that fair was not a word that need apply to the fight, Naruto pulled Sasuke down and held the back of his head under the water as he claimed the brunet’s lips. Sasuke struggled a moment longer before surrendering into the kiss, relaxing against Naruto’s body. The blonde took advantage of this and switched their positions, taking control of their kiss as he did. Slowly, he traced the contours of Sasuke’s mouth with his tongue as his fingers slowly massaged the wet hair and his hips moved gently against the one below him, revealing his own reawakening arousal as well as that of the pale brunet. After a long time, one that wasn’t nearly long enough, the demand for air became too much and Naruto had to pull back, but only enough to allow them both to breathe. Sasuke was panting below him, his cheeks tinted with pink, his lips swollen from the kiss, his eyes still mostly closed, his lashes brushing his cheeks. He looked positively edible, Naruto thought as he tried to slow his breathing down to a reasonable pace. Slowly, those black eyes opened to meet his. “C’mon, let’s get in the water,” he said, moving slowly to get up off the too tempting Uchiha heir.

Silently, Sasuke moved to follow, taking Naruto’s hand when he proffered it as support. He didn’t let go of it as they stepped into the warm water, each sighing in pleasure as they sank chin deep in the pool. Sasuke brought their interlaced fingers to his lips. “Last night went a little faster than I wanted it to,” he murmured, examining the twined digits in minute detail. “I don’t regret it,” he continued, “but…”

“It’s okay,” Naruto cut him off, “we have time…”

“But…I wanted our first time to be…I dunno…special…” he dropped his eyes to the water, his expression uncertain. He was a little surprised when Naruto crawled into his lap.

“It was, Sasuke.”

“But…” His protest was cut off as soft lips claimed his. Naruto let go of his hand and gently held the sides of his face, not deepening the kiss, only preventing the brunet from talking for a minute.

Pulling back, Naruto whispered, “What do you want from our second time?”

Sasuke looked at the boy in amazement. He knew Naruto tended to be direct, but he didn’t quite expect this direct. He stammered, “A-a-anything you want.”

The grin that graced the blonde’s round face was positively lecherous. “Anything?” he asked, letting his hands slide down Sasuke’s neck, bringing his lips to the pale neck. “Anything I want?” He began kissing the boy’s neck, trailing kisses from behind the shell of the ear downwards. He relished the shivers he got when he touched certain spots, suckling on these spots a little longer.

Reasons to protest quickly left as Naruto’s lips brushed up against his skin. “Anything…” Sasuke answered, the word dissolving into a groan as Naruto’s lips found his curse mark again. Sasuke’s arms went around the boy as Naruto brought his teeth to the sensitive flesh, biting around it, drawing a groan out of the pale boy.

Naruto held onto that spot for a while, biting it and sucking, leaving his own mark there, claiming the Uchiha heir as his. He pulled back and surveyed his work, satisfied with the bright red mark that promised to darken nicely. He looked into Sasuke’s face, enjoying the flush that covered the boy’s cheeks as his half lidded eyes smoldered with desire. Remembering something from the night before, he asked, “Sasuke, do you have any lotion out here?”

Reluctantly, Sasuke released the blonde. “No, but there’s some oil over there,” he pointed to a natural ledge in the rocks just barely within arm’s reach.

The blonde snagged the bottle and set it within easy reach next to them. “If you want me to stop, just say so, okay?”

“How about if I want you to go?” Sasuke asked, wrapping his arms around the body in his lap.

Naruto grinned, bringing his lips closer to Sasuke’s, but not touching them, “Then just say so.”

“Go,” Sasuke breathed out. As soon as the word left his lips, his mouth was claimed by a very possessive blonde. Instinctively, he tried to take over their kiss for a moment but found himself quickly overwhelmed by the sensations on his mouth and the feel of Naruto’s hips rocking gently against his. The blonde was hard, his erection rubbing against him, warmer than the water that surrounded their bodies. He surrendered to Naruto, allowing passion to flood him, starting in his mouth and groin. Thought left the dark head as his arms went again around the blonde, his hands wandering up and down, eventually settling on holding the slowly moving ass. His head came to rest on the edge of the pool, his body relaxing under the blonde as his arousal grew. He felt Naruto’s hands roam his entire chest, abdomen, arms, everywhere the blonde could reach without breaking their kiss. Well, almost every where. He deliberately avoided touching Sasuke’s erection. This could have been frustrating, except for the gentle movement of Naruto’s hips and the flow of the water.

Naruto kissed down Sasuke’s neck, reexploring the exposed column, touching each bit of flesh with his lips, and those that brought out groans with his tongue and teeth. Part of his mind smirked. Sasuke would have a lot of marks on his neck before Naruto was finished with him. If Naruto had his way, he doubted he’d ever truly be finished with the pale boy who lay open beneath him. Naruto pulled back a moment to survey the pale boy, his hair, somehow still standing up in the back, even though it was wet now, the softly closed eyes, the flushed cheeks, the parted lips, the slight sheen of sweat that made the boy seem to glow. He was beautiful to behold. Naruto allowed his eyes to continue their feast as he slowly moved the boy’s legs, spreading them gently. Sasuke’s eyes opened blearily and Naruto reassured him, “It’s okay…just relax. If you want me to stop, just say so, okay?”

“You’re gonna…” Sasuke started to say, his voice coming from somewhere a million miles away.

“Yeah, if you’re okay with it. If not, just say so.” Naruto moved his hands slowly up and down Sasuke’s thighs, hoping that Sasuke wouldn’t tell him to stop.

Sasuke managed a smile, his eyes drifting shut again, “’sokay.”

Naruto could have leapt for joy, only he figured that wouldn’t get him what he wanted, so he settled for kissing Sasuke deeply as he raised the Uchiha’s legs until his feet rested on the bottom of the pool. The blonde knelt gently between the spread legs, slowly lowering his body onto Sasuke’s, making sure the other was as comfortable as possible. Not that he really needed to worry, looking at Sasuke’s face, lost in sensation, his defenses down as he allowed Naruto to do whatever he wished to his body. Naruto traced one thigh with his fingers, his eyes wandering down from Sasuke’s face. Through the rippling distortion, his eyes refamiliarized themselves with the pale body, the smooth pale skin of his chest and abdomen, the dark circles of his nipples. Naruto allowed his hands to come up, remembering how good it felt when Sasuke had played with his and wanting to give the dark haired boy at least as much pleasure…more if he could. In his mind, the more pleasure he brought Sasuke, the longer the other would want him around, and he wanted to be around for a long time. With their bodies in the water, though, he couldn’t use his mouth to explore, but he wasn’t ready to leave. He was enjoying watching Sasuke being relaxed too much, so he used his hands and fingers to explore the smooth skin. The range of noises escaping the pale throat was astounding. Small sighs, little groans, moans, some louder, some softer, blends…it was simply remarkable the number and variety of sensual sounds could be produced by the same throat that had until recently usually produced scornful tones around him. He was torn between wanting to watch his hands as they traveled the brunet and wanting to watch Sasuke’s face, his eyes darting between the two. Naruto’s fingers lightly brushed against the dark circles on the pale chest and elicited the loudest groan he’d heard yet. His eyes went to the other’s face, watching as waves of pleasure coursed across the pale features. Tentatively, he brought his fingers together around the nubs, pinching them. Sasuke moaned loudly and arched into the touch, encouraging Naruto to continue while remaining relaxed. Grinning a little, Naruto experimentally twisted his fingers and was surprised by a gasp and Sasuke throwing his head back further against the edge of the pool. The offer was too tempting and Naruto took it, bringing his lips again to the pale throat as his fingers continued to pinch and twist Sasuke’s nipples.

Sasuke was lost in a world of pleasure. The warmth of the water, the blonde’s hands on his body, his lips on his neck. He never would have believed he could feel so happy, so at peace. He could forget everything else, his past, his future, everything, and just allow his attention to rest on the here and now, on Naruto’s touches and kisses. He brought his hands up and rested them on the blonde’s shoulders, not directing him anyway, just holding on, seeking some anchor in the sensation that flooded him. Naruto’s hands were wandering again, tracing his ribs downwards before following the bottom border inwards till he reached the highest point of that graceful arch and then his fingers slowly slid downwards again. Anticipation was building in the brunet’s body, his breathing becoming erratic, his heart speeding as Naruto’s fingers wandered closer to his aching erection. He whimpered when Naruto bypassed his shaft, but that sound was quickly replaced with a soul-deep groan as the blonde’s fingers pressed against his opening. He tipped his hips upward, encouraging and opening himself to Naruto’s exploration, wanting to feel more. This action caused the teasing finger to slip inside and another loud moan escaped his throat. He couldn’t remember ever feeling so good. His arms tightened around the blonde, silently begging for more.

Naruto was worried about hurting Sasuke. He remembered the comments about friction and skin to skin contact being painful, but…there was the water…would that be enough? Sasuke didn’t seem to be in any pain, if the noises he was making were any indication, so the blonde shrugged mentally and began to move his finger deeper into the pale body, wondering how loud the Uchiha heir would be, if he’d call out his name at the height of his passion. He slowly withdrew his finger, relishing the tiny whimper of need before reentering the brunet. Over and over, Sasuke’s pants and groans growing louder as Naruto continued to move his finger within the pale boy. Needing more, Naruto with drew his single finger and slid two into the waiting hole. Sasuke groaned again, thrusting his hips upwards to welcome the invaders. Naruto groaned at such a wanton display, leaving the pale neck so that he could watch Sasuke’s face. Black eyes were hidden by heavy lids, eyelashes rested on flushed cheeks and his lips were full, red, parted as Sasuke breathed in panting gasps. Naruto drew his fingers apart and watched the change come over the flushed face. Sasuke’s brows arched and drew together, his eyelids fluttered before scrunching and his lips opened wider, forming an ‘o’ as a gasp fled from his throat. Needing more, Naruto withdrew his fingers and added a third, sliding them in as far as he could. Without conscious effort, he found the spot that had driven him wild when Sasuke found it in him, and the effect was electrifying. Sasuke’s back arched, and a near scream escaped his throat, forming the blonde’s name as his hands clutched convulsively at the blonde. Naruto’s jaw dropped from such a wonton display and his shaft pulsed demandingly. He became more aware of the ache between his legs as Sasuke’s groans began sounding like pleas. Slowly, he bent over, bringing his lips to Sasuke’s ear, “In here?”

“Please,” Sasuke managed to whimper out. His mind was barely functioning enough to understand the question, much less formulate an answer. Whatever Naruto had hit in him, it had brought him to the very edge of pleasure, almost pushing him over. He needed to cum, but he wanted to feel more. If just the fingers felt so good, what would Naruto’s shaft feel like? He wanted to know. He wanted that sensation to push him over the edge.

A little uncertain and a little unstable, Naruto balanced himself with his free hand as the one that’d been in Sasuke guided his erection to the brunet’s waiting hole. Slowly, he entered, gasping himself at the constricting heat as he watched Sasuke’s head roll back, a long deep groan emerging from his chest. Releasing his shaft, he used both hands to balance his body as he slid into the pale body now writhing beneath him, gritting his teeth for control. Sasuke’s fingers were gripping his shoulders painfully and he could feel the boy’s legs rubbing against his sides. When his hips pressed against Sasuke’s firm ass, he rested his head against the other’s shoulder, panting.

Sasuke’s mind shut down completely in favor of the sensations flooding his body from his ass. His body ached, felt too full, stretched in the most delightfully erotic way. He could feel the blonde panting against him. “More,” he managed to gasp out. As reward, Naruto slowly slid back a little before pushing forward again. The friction was bliss, nothing less. Again, Sasuke panted out, “More,” rocking his hips to encourage the kyubi holder to move more deeply, to push him over the edge, to fill him.

Naruto lifted his head from Sasuke’s shoulder, wanting to see the brunet as he began to move in earnest within the burning heaven of the pale boy’s dark opening. His opportunity to watch was cut short, however, as Sasuke pulled him down, bringing their lips together, demanding to be dominated in every way possible at the same time. What little control over himself Naruto did have flew away under such an assault. His body began moving in its own rhythm, one Sasuke matched stroke for stroke, as his tongue did the same to the brunet’s mouth. Too quickly, the pressure of impending orgasm was building, but there was nothing Naruto could do to stop it, and he didn’t want to, but he did want Sasuke to go with him. Quickly, he slid a hand between their bodies to stroke Sasuke’s neglected erection. The brunet broke their kiss, gasping out Naruto’s name as he did. Sasuke’s name escaped Naruto’s lips as he felt the pale boy’s shaft pulse in his hand and the gripping hole became impossibly tight around his shaft, rippling and pulling his orgasm from him, pulling his soul, every drop of energy along with it.

Bonelessly, Naruto collapsed on Sasuke, panting, feeling the brunet’s chest heaving under him. In his daze, he whispered, “I love you,” not quite fully aware he’d said it until Sasuke replied, “I love you, too,” in the same tone. With a contented sigh, Naruto allowed himself to relax and enjoy being held by the pale boy

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A/N again, I don't own Naruto and barely can claim my own...sanity for lack of a better word. For those that did not look up the hint and chapter title, it means "(n) (sudden) complete reversal (of plot)/unexpected twist (at end of story)" according to teh Japanese-English Dictionary Interface. I like to play with the concept of dominance in relationships...to me, it's not about who's doing the fucking or who's being fucked, but who is in control, which isn't always neccessarily the person in the lead, either...and I still need a lot of work on physical description, I know...I'm trying, but it's hard for me to figure out how to fit it into the flow of the story. I know it can be done...I've read very wonderful examples of it being done, but I haven't figured it out for myself yet...I will, though :D Again, hope you liked this :D

Wow...I asked for 10 reviews and got 16...the most I've gotten on a single chapter...wow....thank you thank you!
Kitsune: Thank you :D I hate computer haituses...they're the worst....I'm so addicted! lol See... you reviewed...I updated, but this is the end of the story...I have another that's been in my head and I'm gonna go write it out now....
Leasan: I try...:D At least, I deliver, too...hope you liked this, too :D
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Hoshi: Do you really hate me? Honestly? I can always not let you know what I write ;) Thanks, love :D
Nathaniel: Thank you for your review :D Fangirl? Am I? Oh, dear...I need to work on that...I try not to be ;) The way I see their relationship is that Naruto is the dominant partner, no matter which position he's in. In my mind (scary place), Naruto was in control of the entire encounter even though Sasuke was taking the lead. Their relationship is fairly equal, but Naruto set the pace more than Sauske did. As for why they went straight to sex...that's what happened in my head...I don't plan or plot out my stories...it's more like I'm watching things happen in my head (again, scary place) and write them out. If I try to change things, then I run into blocks and end up frustrated that the characters aren't doing what I want...but, they insist on doing what they want. *shrug* I have written things that didn't get beyond heavy petting...but each story is at the whim of the characters.
Luminaris: Thank you :D
mE: Thank you :D Yeah, I see Naruto as denying pain, denying any form of weakness in an effort to be stronger than Sasuke.
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Opium: Thank you :D I've been called a tease on multiple occasions and told that if breathing interfered with my ability to write that that could be taken care of...I like to play with people and my muse also dictates chapter breaks. Yes, I admit they can be evil...I've broken a chapter in the middle of a sentance before ;) But, I justify it by delivering ;D
touya: :D Demanding slave driver! Harassing me in IM when it'd only been *three* days...geesh! lol Give a girl a chance to write! lol Thanks
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Reyn: I know...sometimes it's the oddest things that stand out :D I remember reading one story and thinking the best part of it had nothing to do with the lemon, but rather with the conversation before hand...and sometimes the hottest things are the simplest.
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Okay...my next feat of wonder...Youko Kurama (from YYH) making a mistake ;) Byes...and remember to review...it's the only payment I get :D lol
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