The Return Of Uzumaki Dandji

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first up:

Cyraxr.

On the sexy jutsu your logic works for me. So the tailed beast have two cats in their ranks in your world the other being the two tailed cat who is in a female ninja from the village hidden in the clouds, her name is Yugito Nii not sure which is her last name. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Naruto this is the wikipedia page it might be of some help for some of the jutsu and other things. On the writing when you change who is speaking or thinking you start a new line it makes it easier tell you is talking and is easier to read. About the end of the third chapter it is odd that the Anbu would jump to that conclusion and even if they had they would of either taken her with them or would have left her guarded while the others went to get backup to help escort her back to the village. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, Temari, and fem Kyuubi. P.S. I did like the chapter.

answer: thank you for the notice, but i alreaddy use the Narutopedia (there is a wikipedia for naruto alone) i have messed with the 2 tailed too, gave more sence to me, and on the talking thing, i know it can be a little annoying, but i like it better like this, but at least i put 2 or 3 spaces between the start and end of talking/thinking. and they whernt gonna leave her there for long, but they where disturbed... read on:D

And i am glad you liked the cahpter too:D



a New one:D

Turacy Nage.

just finished reading1-3 chaps, this is really good. yay he's gonna use kyu chakra, wonder who what will happen with kid at the end of chap. 3.

thank you:D yes he is. and What? wonder who what? freely interperitated question answered here:D i know, nd you'll find out if you stay tuned:D







The return of Uzumaki Dandji. Chapter 4



Disclaimer: I do not own, will ever own nor have ever owned Naruto, just face it, if I did would I be writing fanfics?

I don’t own the characters of this fic except for one, I made him up in my twisted little head.

And I might have taken a few ideas from fanfic authors that I have read and like, sorry about that (sweat drop)



I also messed up some facts to make the story more believable. No like no read.



“stuff” = speaking.

(stuff) = authors comment.

`stuff´ = thinking.

*stuff* = demon speak.





Hinata’s POV.



Hinata woke up before the break of dawn, her eyes fluttering sleepily. *and to say I am too bold, kukuku* `huh, morning Kaku-san. What do you mean?´ *forgot your dream already?* `Hinata blushed insanely as pictures of her tackling Naruto to the ground showering him with kisses passed by her eyes´ “eep” `its not nice to invade others dreams´ *not like I got a choice, I am stuck in here* `yeah, I am sorry about that.´ *don’t worry, it takes some getting used to* Kaku said, Hinata felt a smile filling her from the inside out. It was strange feeling a smile instead of seeing it, but the feeling was pleasant so she didn’t mind a bit.

`Kaku-san, you mind if we train before breakfast?´ *not the least. But you don’t have to ask me, you are in charge, I am just the freeloader* Hinata was sad the Kaku thought of herself as a freeloader, she was Hinata’s first real friend. *thanks* `huh? Ohh yeah, mind reading´

Hinata got dressed in silence, not wanting to tell people that she was awake. She snuck out of the mansion, unheard moving like a shadow. Only, one set of eyes followed her through the walls. `What is that demon up to?´ Hiashi Hyuga deactivated his Byakugan and turned to the dining room.



Hinata spent her morning training her Jyūken. (Gentle fist, the Hyuga melee style) she was steadily improving without a trainer, because no one in the family would train her after she got 5, claiming she was a lost case. It had hurt, and it still did. But she denied to stop trying, she followed her crushes nindo (way of the ninja) to never give up. That and she wanted to make her family acknowledge her, just like she wanted Naruto to. But her progress was hindered, without any way to gain knowledge of the higher levelled moves, she had to improve the basic and improvise the rest. Sometimes that could be dangerous in a combat situation, witch was why try tried and tested new moves she made up alone before testing them in a spar. But she was always afraid of sparing, no one held back on her. But it was the only way to see the higher levelled moves for her, by trying to copy them while they where used against her.

After a few hours of intense training, Hinata was exhausted. And decided to go back home and get some breakfast. She walked slowly, enjoying the rays of the rising sun on her back, smiling content for herself. Even though she knew she was far from alone. *That was a good training session. You made some definite improvement from last.* `thanks.´ Hinata was happy for the praise, she had never been encouraged by someone before. With the exception of Naruto, and he didn’t even know he was her inspiration. *when are you going to talk to him?* `i-I can’t just do that.´ *why not* Kaku whimpered rather pleadingly, she was obviously not the one for the silent admirer approach. Hinata turned so red tomatoes would envy her and almost fainted at what came next. Out of nowhere Kaku had drawn the picture of Hinata and Naruto kissing deeply. `t-t-that wa-was u-un-uncalled f-f-for´ *no it wasn’t* Kaku smirked to herself. `st-stop making things up´ *but I am not making things up, I can just call forth my memories and show you. You dreamt that a few days ago.* `you can recall everything I say, see and do?´ *yes, my memory in infinite* `then next time we train, can you show me my sparing fights? It would be easier to copy if I could see it again´ *brilliant Hinata, I never thought of that* with that Hinata reached the entrance to the Hyuga compound. “Hinata. Where have you been this morning?” there was no concern in Hiashi’s voice, only venom. As if his voice alone could kill small animals. (I swear, the squirrel dropped dead from a tree as he spoke)

Hinata was taken aback from his sudden appearance. She had thought she could sneak in and get some breakfast and then return to her training. “you have a sparing match with Neji now, and you made us all wait.” `Ohh no, I am completely exhausted, it’s going to be a massacre.´ *don’t worry little one, I’ll help you the best I can* Hinata felt a sudden surge of energy, it felt so good for a second, but then her shoulder started burning with pain. Now Hinata was not one to cry or scream from pain, indeed, she cried when her emotions where struck. But she had learned to deal with physical pain rather well from her punishments over the years. In fact she had once stepped on a nail that had impaled her foot completely when she was five, without making a sound from it.

But this, this was earth shatteringly painful. She dubbed over with a scream, clinging to the source of her pain, her left shoulder and cried from the pain as the world turned black and she was unable to phantom anything but the pain she felt.

Hiashi was worried. Not for his daughter in the least. But for his clans reputation. He had activated his Byakugan to see if his suspicion was correct. The emergency seal had taken effect. `and to think that fool said it was a bad idée to have it´ He was well aware that the demons chakra had started flowing through his disgrace of a daughter, and the backup seal had worked perfectly, stopping it completely.

Hinata woke up in her bed under the watchful eye of the family doctor. And she wished she hadn’t, those hateful eyes always made her want to cry. “finally up, brat. Making me come all the way here for absolutely nothing.” She hated that man even more than her father; he didn’t even care to pretend not to hate her with all of his guts. Neji was by far the best, he was mean and he disliked her. But there was no hate in his eyes. He must not have been told. “Your father send for me for no reason. What is up with you just faking to void a spar?” “Ohh, Neji must be mad.” “Naah, I doubt it, he’ll be better off training on his own than sparing with you.”

“There is nothing wrong with you.” And with those words the doctor left. *I’m so sorry* came the crying voice of Kaku. `What’s wrong´ was Hinata’s reply. *I didn’t know, I honestly didn’t know. I feel so stupid* `would you mind to explain?´ Kaku sobbed loudly before she continued. *I’m to blame, it’s my fault* `KAKU! Calm down and tell what you did.´ *the pain, all the pain, it was my fault. I didn’t know* `Kaku-san, I just told you to explain, tell me what happened´ *I gave you some of my chakra so you could spar with your cousin. But it hurt you, it wasn’t spouse to but it hurt you greatly.* `you didn’t expect that your demon chakra would hurt me?´ *your different, a jinhcuken as humans call it. That means you can handle my chakra, any demons chakra in fact.* `jinchuken? What is that?´ *the human word for a demon carrier. You had me inside you from birth, so you are accustomed to my chakra. If a grown person had a demon inserted, he or she would die instantaneously. From chakra poisoning.* `chakra poisoning? What is that?´ *chakra in not always good for you, if a good person absorbs chakra from a very evil person, it will hurt them until it is converted through the heart, same thing if its reversed. Chakra poisoning can be very bad or even kill someone. But demon chakra, it can only be handled by demons or jinchuken. Its far to powerful for anyone else to handle.* `so, it should not have hurt me?´ *do you remember the nice feeling before the pain, that is how its was spouse to feel, I only gave you a very small amount that should refresh you.* `that felt wonderful, but why did it hurt then?´ *where did the pain come from?* `my left shoulder, do you have a suspicion?´ *your father might have placed an extra seal on you, to prevent me from helping you. Take your hoodie off and take a look at your shoulder* Hinata took off her hoodie, slightly mad that the doctor had not even cared to look at the place she had clung to when the pain had hit her. She then pulled up her under shirt over her shoulder, looking at her skin. `there is nothing there´ *Hinata sweaty, you can’t see seals on people if you don’t use chakra, focus your chakra and lets see.* Hinata closed her eyes and focused, bobbling her chakra around in her system. She felt a slight sting on her shoulder and opened her eyes. A complex seal had formed on her shoulder. Kaku started making an angry sound somewhere in between a hiss and a growl. *THAT BASTERD!* Hinata was shocked, never had she felt such a pure surge of anger. `what is it Kaku-san? Why are you so angry.´ *that seal, the bastard actually placed THAT seal on his own daughter* `what is it?´ *its yaku kutsuu no shiiru (the seal of searing pain), its not a suppressing seal. Its made to make sure that prisoners cannot use chakra to flee, and as a torture method. If the seal is exposed to chakra it sends am all shadowing pain through you. This one is apparently made to only react to demon chakra.* `Kaku-san, are you sure?´ *I am a seal expert, I know how seals work, how to place and counter them. And sadly, I can’t do anything against this seal. Not without bringing unbearable pain to you.* `I understand. So you cant help me at all?´ *not with my chakra. But you might benefit from my experience. I have lived longer than the human race.* `arigato Kaku-san´ *don’t mention it, it’s the least I can do. I am the reason for your unjust suffering.* Kaku had a small pause. *besides, I have come to like you over the years.* A warm feeling of wellness filled Hinata. It didn’t come from her link, as she had come to call it, with Kaku. `this must be what being liked feels like.´ she felt a confirmation from within. She then wondered how it would feel like to have Naruto like her. The thought made her blush.

`Kaku-san, mind going to train.´ *I wouldn’t mind, but don’t you have something you need to first* `Neji-nii-san, I had totally forgotten.´

Hinata sprinted out to find her cousin and apologise for her absence.





Little girls POV.



“Where are they?” she asked to herself. `They said they would be here in an hour. But they said that yesterday.´ The unfortunate little girls stomach growled loudly. `I’m so hungry´ and indeed that was true, she had not eaten for two whole days. She hadn’t had anymore food the day she fled with her mother, into that cold dark wet place to here. But where was here? She only knew she could see a lake just beside her, that did not help on her undying thirst. And that she was in the middle of a forest somewhere warmer than she was used to. “I want my mommy back” She silently cried to herself.

Little did the poor girl know that less than five minuets after they had left her, they had run into two enemy black and red cloaked shinobi with matching straw hats. And was slaughtered mercilessly. They had left the dead ANBU with the words. “come on new guy, we have a demon to capture.” “Hai senpai.”

Once again she tried doing what she had done at home, getting the water to move with her hands and will, but her hands where restrained now, and the range was higher.







Dandji’s POV.



Dandji sighed loudly. After Naruto came home from school they had immediately started training, but his ¨secret¨ nephew had no self-control at all. At first Naruto had tried to force out the kyuubi’s chakra with his own. Resulting in Dandji punching him on the top of his head with the words. “It escapes the purpose if you use your chakra.” Then Dandji got Naruto riled up, knowing that the only way to harness the demon chakra was to control his emotion. And that anger was easiest to use. It had worked fast. And at the late hour’s of the day he had made Naruto angry enough to pull some chakra through. “Good, now control your anger.” Dandji took one look at his nephew and knew it was hopeless. Naruto had gotten to angry, to out of control to come down again on his own. And just before Naruto got in the dangerous state of mind, Dandji made a quick Jyūken strike on his forehead, efficient knocking him out completely. (yes, Dandji knows Jyūken) `Baka, you’re suppose to ask Kyuubi for help, you can’t do it yourself yet, the seals is still to strong for that. But I can’t just tell you, you have to figure it out yourself.´ he sighed again and dragged his nephew home.

It kept at this for 3 days. Naruto got too riled up to control himself to gain the chakra, but had not once asked his demon for help. `This is going nowhere, if there is no progress today there is no hope that he’ll make it. I am gonna have to write a note for him and excuse his absence…´ Dandji pondered who he should get Naruto out of his trouble without drawing suspicion to himself. He didn’t want some of his old ¨friends¨ to find him; I would bring danger to Konoha.

“Uzumaki!” someone yelled `ohh shit, I know that voice.´ “we’ve come to take your demon with us” Dandji and Naruto turned simultaneously, looking at the invaders. Naruto spoke up first, “Why do you want her?” This seemed to take the older invader aback. `Shit Naruto, cant you keep your mouth shut once in a while?´ “huh, Dandji. Is that yours?” `Might as well get it out in the open´ “he’s my brothers. They look alike don’t they?” Naruto dropped his jaw to the floor, for once completely lost for words.

Hoping that Naruto would be to dumbstruck to interfere Dandji made a break for it. Attacking the unknown enemy with the giant weapon on his back. He knew attacking someone head on was a dump eider, but he was Orochimaru’s new apprentice, therefore he must be both dangerous and unable to think for himself. “I’m surprised they let you stay in Akatsuki with all the new guys you lose hunting me.” This seemingly made the new one flitch, `he had obviously not been told I killed at least 6 rookie Akatsuki members over the years they have been hunting me´. Dandji threw a punch at the new one. He was seemingly just going to let it fall, not moving at all. “So, what’s your name? I like knowing who I fight” the stranger drew his weapon and blocked the punch with a nanoseconds notice. “I’m Kisame, the new guy.” He threw his hat away, revealing his face to his opponents, he was… well, blue. `ok, he is fast, and he is handling his weapon with one hand. Plus that thing drains chakra.´ “I would like to introduce you to Shameha. My razor-edge blade.” He removed the bandages that covered is sword, showing the strange purple blade below, clearly not meant to cut, but shed its target. Dandji quickly formed a few hand seals and fired a pillar of flames from his hands against Kisame. Kisame then made a some seals of his own and sprayed water from his mouth, extinguishing the fire without problems. “Orochimaru-senpai, didn’t you say this guy was a tough nut to crack? He is no sweat.” “fool, he is just testing your strength, now he knows that earth jutsu are best to counter your attacks. Besides, that is nothing but a shadow clone.” Kisame looked shocked and then stared at the mad he had fought, as he simply disappeared into smoke. “seems you have more chakra than the others of Akatsuki, that I have meet anyway.” Kisame looked over in anger, as Dandji was sitting on his ass at a table with a steaming cup of tea and a plate of biscuits. “biscuit?” He asked, while he took a sip of his tea. All the while he had mock sincerity in his voice.

“I AM GOING TO KILL YOU!!!” Kisame sprinted towards Dandji’s table, swinging his sword straight through it, it disappearing as was it mist. “Gen-jutsu? Damn you Uzumaki!”

Kisame dispelled the low rank gen-jutsu and joined up with Orochimaru. “you done playing yet?” Asked Orochimaru his half brained partner. Kisame looked down, clearly he was ashamed of himself. “hai senpai” “good, then lets get him” the two Akatsuki members charged Dandji together, trying to lure him into a trap. Dandji fought back with what seemed like vigour. But in real he had a very different plan. `Naruto is just standing there, these guys could not have picked a better time. One should have thought it was destiny´ (I like that last comment:D)



Naruto’s POV.



`He is an Uzumaki? Is that why he likes me? Because I am family to him.´ Naruto had inner turmoil, he was not completely combatable with someone lying to him so clearly, but he was the only grown up person besides Iruka and the third to ever care about him. *hey kid* `huh? What is it Kyuubi?´ *take a look at this fight, you might learn something* it only then cleared to Naruto that they where fighting, they where moving ridiculously fast but he was still able to see them. `You’re right, sorry´ *don’t mention it kit* Naruto looked at the battle, it seemed like Dandji had the upper hand even though he was fighting two against one. Fire, earth, water and snakes was spraying from everywhere, fire against Orochimaru, earth against Kisame and water and snakes where all the time on Dandji’s heels. As the battle went on, more and more of the landscape was getting ruined, Naruto himself had hid behind a boulder just in case. Beside the fact that Dandji was fiery at first, he was slowly loosing ground in the battle, even getting a few superficial wounds. Naruto was getting worried, he even felt a small amount of worry from Kyuubi within him. `Kyu, we need to help him´ Naruto had not even noticed he had given his demon a nickname, his tendency to talk familiarly with everyone simply overshadowed his normal fear of her in this pressured situation. And the fact that she liked her new nickname was something she was properly never going to admit. *ok kid, lets help him* Naruto was already reaching unconsciously for Kyu’s chakra with his mixed emotions, so she had a fairly easy time posting her chakra through the seal into him. Making him several times his normal power. `argh, it stings.´ *I know, just bare with it, its because your body in not used to so much chakra, the more you pull out the worse it is gonna get.* Naruto grunted, trying to maintain his cool under the influence of both animalistic power and the pain it brought. It was hard but he managed. Testing his new strength, Naruto punched his fist forward into the human sized boulder he was hiding behind. Shattering it into tiny little pieces. Then he made a sprint for the stronger Orochimaru and punched him on the back of his head, clearly catching him off guard. As he was not expecting the boy to act at all. (he is suppose to be a ninja, but he failed to notice a boulder blowing to tiny bits…)

His body was send sprawling through the air into a tree that cracked in half as he flew through.

Suddenly Naruto felt more power, not from himself but besides him. He slowly turned and saw Dandji with light blue chakra swirling around him. And then he vanished, not even Naruto’s new predator eyes of the fox could follow where he went. A second later he heard what seemed to be

Kisame roar in pain. Kyu’s chakra subdued from Naruto, making him feel weak and vulnerable.

The world went black, Kyu’s voice echoing through his head. *its ok, sleep. You worked yourself hard.*



Naruto’s eyes fluttered open seeing two pairs of eyes, one pair sky blue, and one pair pale lavender. `What pretty eyes´ Naruto focused on the pretty lavender orbs, blocking out the blue eyes. `Who has so pretty eyes?´ Naruto asked himself. He heard some mumbled words, the eyes was trying to talk to him. *ku ku ku.* That Naruto heard clearly, why was there a difference? He could not think clearly, but the nice eyes where trying to talk to him, and he didn’t want to disappoint the nice eyes. So he tried to listen, forcing himself out of the nice half-awake state. “huh?” he was coming closer to the surface, and was making out the voices more clearly, one small and timid but calling his name none the less. And the other harder but still caring. “wake up Naruto” “Na-Naruto, please wake up”.

Naruto lifted his head up, looking closer at the pretty eyes, when he woke up completely, finding himself a mare half inch from Hinata’s tomato red face, “Hinata?!” Naruto made out, pulling back his head, smacking it hard on the ground below. (You thought there was going to be a kissing scene there, weren’t you?)

Naruto griped the back of his head, rubbing his now sore spot. “itai”(auh) “Hinata, what are you doing here?” Naruto diverted his gaze to Dandji, silently asking if she saw anything. Dandji shook his head slowly, making Naruto much more comfortable. Looking back at Hinata, who was looking at the ground next to Naruto. “I-I-I ca-came here to-to tra-train. And I fo-found D-Dandji sit-sitting next to you, un-uncon-unconscious.” `She was worried about me?´ *Noo, she wanted to molest you in your sleep* Kyu’s sarcastic voice drew through Naruto’s head. `Stop that!´ *what? Don’t like me messing with the ¨pretty eyes¨?* `shut up´ Naruto blushed slightly as he felt Kyu’s laughter rummage through him. “a-are you o-okay?” Hinata’s voice brought him back to the real world. “I’m good Hinata, no need to worry.” He flashed her his fox grin, but she saw the difference. This one was not fake, she was really smiling, just for her. Her heartbeat rose and she grew even more red and fell on top of him. “HINATA!?!” Naruto screamed as he felt her limb body on his. It took less than a second for him to take a gentle hold of her, spin around so he was over her and put her down gently, looking to see if she was ok. “don’t worry, she’ll be just fine.” “ok.” Naruto said, as he took of his jacked and put it under Hinata’s head as a pillow. He turned to Dandji, “we need to talk.”



End of chapter 4.



Aren’t I mean sometimes?





Ok, voting time :D I have a plot twist up me sleeve that is going to change the story drastically, it basically changes the rules a bit, making every team a 4 genin and one jounin. I want the readers to vote in comments on rather you want 3 or 4 person teams. The voting is very important, but not for a chapter or two, didn’t want to make you wait till the voting is over before I start the next chapter.

Aside from that, have anyone guessed who the little girl is? Take your shot!