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Mr. Right

By: ringpop
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 21
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Chapter 5

Okay new chapter!!

ON WITH THE FIC!!

“Speech”
Thoughts
Speech/Thoughts or Whisper
*noise/action *
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Sasuke and Naruto got back in the car and drove off.
“So which way is it, I’m still new to this area.” Sasuke said.

“*sighhhhh* Let me drive.”

“What?”

“Let me drive hoe!”

“No, you just want people to see you in my car.”

“No I don’t! ‘Lie!’ I’m really bad with giving directions; we’ll end up in freaking Wonderland if you listen to me. Just- at the next red light get out, and let me drive.”

“*siiiiiighhhh*……..Fine.”

At the next red light, they did just that and switched places. As they were getting out, some people in the car behind, honked at Naruto and Sasuke. One knew Sasuke and the other knew Naruto.

“Hey Naruto!” The passenger hollered.

“Hi Sasuke! I love you!” The driver hollered after.

Naruto waved and smiled cheerfully, whereas Sasuke rolled his eyes and glared.
Naruto got in the driver’s seat and Sasuke in the passenger’s.

“Don’t crash my car dobe.”

“Just for that I will.”

Naruto started driving and jerked the car to the left.

Sasuke looked at Naruto and pursed his lips.

“Shut. Up! I won’t crash your car, duck ass!”

“What?”

“Your hair, it looks like the back of a duck’s ass.”

“Who are you to talk? At least I don’t look like a fucking yellow Sonic!”

Hey, don’t be talkin’ down on my hair…….it’s cooler than yours!” Naruto said under his breath.

They drove without making any noise for a few minutes before Naruto spoke.

“I hate silence.”

“I can tell, you never shut up.”

Naruto threw Sasuke an annoyed scowl and reached over to turn on the radio.

“Lame”

Changed the station.

“Eww, I hate that song.”

Changed the station again.

“Ooo I like this song….aww it’s over!”

Naruto sang the last words to the song as another one started to play.

“Oh, My, God I love this song!!! My dad sings it all the time!”

“I thought your dad died.”

“My real one did-now shut up!”

Naruto began to sing along.

I will love you anyway
Even if you cannot stay

Naruto gyrated to the music in his chair and whipped his head toward Sasuke.
I think you are the one for me
Here is where you ought to be

Naruto glanced at the road and looked back at Sasuke then reached his left hand out to touch Sasuke’s shoulder and slide down slowly, while the right steared.
I just want to satisfy ya
He licked his top lip slowly and kept eye contact.
Though youre not mine
I cant deny ya

Naruto shook Sasuke’s arm.
Dont you hear me talkin baby?
Love me now or Ill go crazy

Naruto retracted his hand and lifted it up in the air pointing up.

Oh sweet thing
Dont you know youre my everything?
Oh sweet thing
Dont you know youre my everything?
Yes, you are

Naruto enphasised the last two sentences of the verse and Sasuke rolled his eyes.

I wish you were my lover
Naruto took two fingers and pushed Sasuke’s head towards the window and Sasuke slapped his hand away.
But ya act so undercover
Sasuke looked out of his window unfazed.
To love you child my whole life long
Be it right, or be it wrong

Sasuke looked over to see Naruto still singing and dancing in his seat.
“Idiot.”
Sasuke turned his head back to look out the window.
Im only what you make me, baby
Naruto reached his hand over once again, this time to cradle Sasuke’s chin gently and turn his head toward him still making eye contact.
Dont walk away, dont be so shady
Dont want your mind, dont want your money
These words I say, they may sound funny, but...

Naruto let go and kept singing.

Oh sweet thing
Dont you know youre my everything?
Oh sweet thing
Dont you know youre my everything?
Yes, you are

They pulled up to the mall parking lot and found a space.

You are my heat
You are my fire

Naruto looked at Sasuke smiling.
You make me weak with strong desire

Naruto cut the car off grinning.

“It’s true Sasuke.”

“Why did you do that?”

Naruto looked confused.

“What?”

“Didn’t I just tell you that it annoys me when people do that to me?”

Naruto looked innocently.

“Do whaaat?”

Sasuke rolled his eyes disgustedly and got out of the car. Naruto followed.

“C’mon Sasuke, don’t be like that, I was only joking.”

“That’s exactly my point, Don’t.”

Sasuke started towards the mall entrance.

Naruto stood thinking, when he noticed Sasuke was gone he ran to catch up with him.

“Okay fine, but I’m not sorry.”

“Whatever.”

As soon as they walked in, it seemed like a thousand screaming girls and a few boys came out of no where, screaming their undying love at Sasuke. Somewhere in all this confusion Naruto was pushed and shoved to the back of the crowd of crazy psychos. Naruto stared through the crowd of people at Sasuke and Sasuke looked at him helplessly. That look, clearly telling him to get his ass back over there and join him against the forces of evil. Naruto pushed his way through the wild crowd and stood back at Sasuke's side looking around at all the different people.

Sasuke looked at Naruto.

"Can you stop staring into space and do something?! This was all your idea!"

Naruto snapped his gaze back at Sasuke.

"What the hell do you want me to do?! How am I going to chase away….what, fifty people?!"

Sasuke glared.

"I don't know, do something!"

"Fine."

Naruto leaned forward pressing his lips to Sasuke's, bringing one of his hands up to bury itself in Sasuke's hair while the other traveled down to press Sasuke's hips to his own and swiping his tongue along the seam of Sasuke's lips. At first Sasuke was so shocked he tensed and didn't move, but after a few seconds he realized what Naruto was doing and he relaxed, wrapped his arms around Naruto's waste and firmly grabbed his ass leaning into him and parting his lips. Naruto moaned, but didn't hesitate to slip his pierced tongue through Sasuke's lips and explore his mouth. After a few groans, tears, and shouts of "How could you?"'s, Naruto smirked into the kiss. The people surrounding them started to dissipate, but the kiss continued. After too long Sasuke was the first to pull away from the kiss for air.

Sasuke looked at Naruto dazed.

"Good one." He said regaining his breath.

Naruto smiled and took the Uchiha's hand in his.

"Yeah, I couldn't think of anything else, let's go."

Sasuke looked at their joined hands and smiled inwardly walking off with Naruto.

After they turned the corner, Naruto let go of Sasuke's hand and continued to walk.
Sasuke looked over at Naruto as to question why he let go of his hand and Naruto noticed.

"No need for that anymore, they're all probably long gone now!"

Sasuke looked down furrowing his brows as they walked.

"….Yeah…."

They walked further in silence until Naruto spoke.

"Okay this is it, c'mon"

Naruto dragged him to a store with all kinds of clothes with different shapes and weird patterns on them.

“Seriously Naruto?”

“What?”

Sasuke picked up a half mesh half cotton shirt.

“This isn’t me.”

“Duhh! That’s why we’re here; I’m dressing you, so shut up.”

Sasuke took a seat in a nearby chair and Naruto looked at him questioningly.

“What are you doing?”

“If you’re dressing me, and I don’t have a say in what your getting me, why waste energy walking around, when I could just sit here?”

Naruto paused.

“You’re right…..okay then, I’ll pick out a few things for you, then we can go.”

Sasuke sat staring at Naruto uninterested, while Naruto looked at Sasuke blankly.

“You’re so boring….”

“You’re so hyper.”

Naruto narrowed his eyes and smirked.

“That’s a good thing.”

Sasuke shook his head and turned away.

Naruto bent down quickly and kissed his forehead.

“I’ll be back in a bit babe!”

Sasuke’s eyes widened a bit.

‘Does he do this to every one?.....if so, I don’t want to be just another person to keep him entertained’

As Sasuke sat waiting for Naruto, someone tapped him on his shoulder from behind and he turned around.

“Hey! What are you doing here?!”

“Oh, Haku right?”

Haku smiled noding.

“Just waiting for my friend to finish shopping.”

Haku followed Sasuke’s gaze to Naruto.

“The blonde one?"

Sasuke nodded his head.

“Normally I go for brunettes, preferably brown but, he’s hot, are you two dating?”

Just when Haku asked, a busty red-head walked over to Naruto and started flirting with him, and………he was flirting back?

Sasuke looked agitated.

“No.” Sasuke said bluntly.

“Oh, sorry.”

'I wonder if he's going to ask her do the dinner……'

The girl nodded and handed Naruto a piece of paper that he stuffed in his back pocket.

“It’s alright. Hey, sorry I haven’t called, I think I lost your number, but are you doing anything this Thursday?”

Haku smiled.

“Revenge. It’s not something you want to evolve yourself in Sasuke, someone’s going to end up geting hurt…..and it’s probably going to be you.”

Sasuke glared.

“It’s not revenge.”

“Whatever you say….No, I’m not doing anything. Why?”

Naruto happened to know where everything he wanted to buy for Sasuke was, and was done purchasing all Sasuke’s new clothes and done ”flirting” with the red-head girl, when in reality he had told the girl that he was already interested in someone. He headed back over to Sasuke in time to hear,

“Would you like to go out with me then?” Sasuke asked.

“Sure, Here’s my number, use it.”

Sasuke smirked and put the number into his cell phone.

“Fine I’ll see you this Thursday then.” Sasuke said.

“Okay, see you handsome.”

Naruto’s heart sank.

‘What?........I ….was….going to…ask…him….’

Naruto stoped to think.

'OH, HEYOL NAW, I AINT NO PUNK!!! NAHH-AHH BITCH! GET ME SOME VASILINE!!! *takes off imaginary earings* WHERE'S MY STRAIGHT BLADE?!' Naruto felt his inner Shaqueesha Peprika Taquineeta Johnson comming out and let rage well up inside of him.


After Haku had walked away, Naruto looked Sasuke in the eyes and dropped the bag into Sasuke’s lap heavily.

“Done.” Naruto said in a monotone voice, starting to walk away.

Sasuke grabbed the bag and stood rushing toward the quickly fleeting Naruto.

“Where are we going now?” Sasuke asked.

“How long are you planning on staying with me?”

“What?”

“When are you getting your key fixed?”

Sasuke was shocked; he thought Naruto wanted him to stay.

“Well, if you want, I can go today.”

“Yeah.”

Sasuke was a little hurt and he didn’t know why.

“Okay, so I guess we’re going then?” Sasuke asked.

“Yeah.”

Sasuke stopped.

“First, are you hungry?”

“Not anymore.” Naruto said a little agitated.

“Anymore?”

“I saw something in the store and it made me lose my apatite.”

“Oh….Alright then, let’s go.”

They walked out of the mall, to the car and Naruto walked to the passenger’s side.

“You don’t want to drive?”

“No.”

Sasuke was confused. He got in the car pulling out and heading for the apartments.

As they were driving a love song came on and Naruto quickly reached across and snapped off the sound.

‘What the hell’s his problem?........could it be because he saw me with Haku?.......no, we’re not even dating or anything, so why would he be mad?’

They drove the whole way in silence, until they made it to the apartments and parked.

Naruto got out of the car with the bags walked around and shoved them into Sasuke’s arms.

“Kay, it was nice, hope your key gets fixed, see you when I see you.” Naruto said turning ready to leave.

“That’s it?”

Naruto stopped and turned around a little pissed but his face didn’t show.

“What else?…..Oh! Do you want my phone number too?”

“You have a nerve, you call me a whore and you can’t even get two feet before you start flirting!”

“What?!”

“You heard me!”

Naruto though about telling him what he had actually told the girl but decided against it.

“Fuck you Sasuke; I don’t have time for this!”

Naruto turned and walked away mumbling, but Sasuke could still hear.

And he talks about serious relationships, HAH!...bastard

Sasuke turned toward the main office pissed, ready to have his key fixed.


Sasuke walked in the main office, stated his problem and they gladly gave him his new key.


He headed up to his apartment with his new clothes, to find that his key worked and his things were already moved in. He paid the movers extra to have his bed put together, tables and other miscellaneous things.He started unpacking and decorating his new apartment. He stopped a few times thinking about Naruto.

“Fuck you Sasuke; I don’t have time for this!”

Sasuke sat thinking about all the things that happened in the last day, when he looked over and spotted the clothes Naruto bought for him earlier.

‘I haven’t seen what he picked out for me yet.’

Sasuke picked up the bag and pulled out a small tight-fitting blue t-shirt that had a red arrow pointing to the right saying I’m With Stupid

‘Cute’

Then he picked up a matching red one that was a little bigger that had a blue arrow pointing to the left reading; I’m With Sexy.

‘This one isn't my size…?....did he get these for us?......no, he couldn’t have…..there is no us.’

He reached in and pulled out another T-shirt, it was green. It had a stick figure smiling widely, holding a picnic basket, frolicking through a field of flowers with words that read; I’m Gay

‘I was never an easy person to read, must be a homo thing.’ Sasuke chuckled.

He reached in and pulled out two pairs of pants; one dark pair that had tares in them and a light pair that were tighter fitting dirty-wash.

‘How did he know my size?'

Sasuke sat wondering.

‘......must have been when he found my clothes this morning.’

He balled up the plastic bag ready to throw it away when he felt something hard inside.

‘There’s more?’

When he re-opened the bag, he reached in and pulled out a small package that had two matching necklaces, that were broken, but when you put them together they made a heart; one piece was red and said; Best and the other blue and read; Friends.

He just met Naruto and he had already lost him.
He felt like crying, but he held it in, and continued working.


After Naruto had left, he walked up the three flights of stairs, in hopes to blow off some smoke…..nope; he went storming into his apartment, slamming doors and cabinets. When he went to take a shower he practically ripped off the shower curtain and the door off the hinges. He didn’t even know why he was so mad.

‘We’re not even dating or anything…now who the hell am I gonna' go with?…whatever….wait, I have an idea'

Naruto picked up his mint Chocolate cell phone and found the person’s number he was looking for.

*Ring*

‘C’mon, I know you’re not sleep.’

*Ring*

“Hello?”

“Hey, it’s Naruto.”

“Hey, man what’s up?”

“You went to Sai’s today, right?”

“Yeah, where were you?”

“At the mall.”

“With who?”

“Dang mom, can I talk?!”

“Fine, my bad.”

“Who are you going with to the dinner?” Naruto asked.

“I wanted to go, but I don’t have anyone to go wi-“

“Now you do.”


TO BE CONTINUED...

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