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Mr. Right

By: ringpop
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
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Chapter 9

GAHH I had to re-re post because the damn thing didn't put my whole story up!!! After the at symbol is wat I ment to post….about 40 minutes ago JEE!!@Sorry I had to delete and repost! i had a rough draft and final and i saved them under the same name, so when i posted....guess what?...i posted the rough draft...so here's the real deal and i hope all you people who read the rough draft re read it because there are some things that were changed/added so everything after the star is wha i ment to post...ehhh three hours ago.*Hey Hey HEEEYYY!!! Okay UPDATE WOOOO!!!! Since I updated….let's all hope that maybe, somehow, Spiraling/KageKitsune updates their stories [sorry I don't know your sexes] HAHAHAH ESPECIALLY YES, YOUNG MASTER & ROLE PLAY AWSOME STORIES!!!! Yeah Kage Kitune & Spiraling….I'm hella advertising your stories. I love you hahahah!!!.....my one love used to be Rasengan22….oh how I miss you dear : ' (


“Speech”
Thoughts
Speech/Thoughts or Whisper
*noise/action *
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By time Naruto made it back into Sasuke's apartment, it was cleaned up and Sasuke was on his computer, dressed for the day in one of the outfits he'd bought for him. The I'm With Stupid shirt and the dark torn jeans. A still nighty-pants, clad Naruto, groaned at the sight of his missed flight.(!)

"Sasukeee." Naruto whined.

Sasuke looked over his shoulder and raised a brow.

"Why are you dresssedd?"

"I'm not; I was just trying the outfit on. Plus you took too long; I want to go out to lunch or something."

Naruto pouted.

"Fine, let me go get dressed." He said melancholy.

Naruto walked out of Sasuke's apartment, fuming at Kiba, into his own, to get dressed and ready for the day. He realized Sasuke was wearing the clothes he'd bought for him and walked back into Sasuke's house without knocking.

"Hey, give me my shirt." Naruto said, like Sasuke was supposed to know exactly what shirt he was talking about. Sasuke turned around confused and Naruto looked away with his arms crossed over his chest and leaning his weight on one leg.

"What shirt?"

"The red one."

Sasuke shook his head, still confused.

"The one?......The one, with the blue arrow that looks like yours, but it says something different."

Sasuke smirked.

"What does it say?"

Naruto narrowed his eyes and pursed his lips.

"Tch."

With that, Naruto walked over to Sasuke's closet and started rummaging through it, searching for the shirt.

"That's not what it says." Sasuke said tauntingly, as he sat still, at the computer with a smug expression on his face, when Naruto went to his dresser and started searching there.

"WHERE IS IT?!" Naruto screamed, agitated.

Sasuke stood smirking, at Naruto's antics and squatted down to reach under his bed. Naruto rolled his eyes when Sasuke pulled out the red shirt from a white bag.

"Y'know, I was wondering why this shirt was too big for me." Sasuke said with a grin.

Naruto snatched at the shirt, but Sasuke pulled it just barely out of his reach.

"You got us matching shirts?" Sasuke said, still grinning.

Naruto stood frowning at this, newer, bolder Sasuke.

"WHAT THE HELL SASUKE?! JUST GIVE ME THE DAMN SHIRT!"

"You want to be with me?......Because, out of ALL your friends, I'm absolutely positive I'm the sexiest."

Naruto snorted, crossing his arms again and Sasuke raised his brows in question.

"................"

Sasuke stepped closer to Naruto, keeping the shirt safe distance from Naruto's reach. He felt like he was totally in control, and it felt goooood.

"Well?"

Naruto shook his head in mock disgust and turned, walking away like he was leaving, then whipped around, shoving Sasuke backwards and snatching the shirt out of his hand. Before Sasuke hit the floor, he swiftly grabbed Sasuke's hand and pulled him back up into his arms, twirling around and leaning Sasuke back on his knee, looking down on him.

"Of course I do." Naruto gave Sasuke a rough kiss, then dropped him on the floor, leaving Sasuke stunned at his actions, walking away smirking.

"Don't fuck with something you can't handle......sexy."

With that, Naruto walked out of Sasuke's apartment and into his own, to take a shower and get dressed.

Twenty minutes later, Naruto exited his bathroom, dressed almost exactly like Sasuke, but had to add his own touch, with the matching blue headband.[Yes, he has a matching headband for everything] Naruto stood in front of his body-length mirror and flashed himself a huge smile, pointing "finger guns" at himself.

"Damn…YOU are one sexy boy."(*)

Naruto walked out of his room and out f his apartment, to go to Sasuke's. He walked into Sasuke's room, to notice that he wasn't in it.

*Shhhh* [......how do you make shower running noises?]

Oh, shower.' Naruto shivered at thought of a dripping wet Sasuke, just a few feet away. Spotting a photo album by Sasuke's computer, Naruto walked over to it and brought it back to the bed, flopping down and opening it.

'This must be his family.' Naruto thought looking at the first picture, of an obviously younger Sasuke and three other people; two males and one female. The woman smiling, looked like she could've been his mother. The tallest male was frowning, crossing his arms, looking down at Sasuke and a boy that looked identical to Sasuke, but was taller and had longer hair, putting him in a headlock and giving a noogie, with a big smile on their faces. Naruto smiled, at the heartwarming photo and turned the page, looking at a photo with an older-than-the-first-picture, Sasuke and two other people, a girl with black glasses and black hair that reached about a little above mid-back, that was flat and straight on one side and unruly and sticking up like Sasuke's does in the back, on the other. Naruto smiled.

'They must be related.'

Then his smile died when he saw the other male. He frowned at the boy with silver-green hair and sharp teeth, behind a grin that clearly said, I had him first, with his arm wrapped around Sasuke's neck. Naruto narrowed his eyes at the shark toothed boy.

"Faggot"(#) Naruto said under his breath agitated.

"Who's a faggo-HEY!" Sasuke yelled, coming out of the bathroom, rushing at Naruto to take his photo album back. Naruto sat up, wide-eyed clutching the photo album to his right shoulder, silently asking if he could keep looking.

"Damn, do you come over here, just to go through my stuff?" Sasuke asked, walking away and putting his clothes in the hamper in the corner, silently answering that he could.

"Who's this boy?" Naruto asked, holding up the album, showing Sasuke. Sasuke frowned.

"Suigetsu." Sasuke said distastefully.

"Were you guys...." Naruto trailed off, knowing Sasuke knew where he was going with the question.

Sasuke raised an eyebrow and Naruto narrowed his eyes and pursed his lips, knowing Sasuke was going to make him say it.

"........................................................were you guys....together?" Naruto said bitterly.

"Yes….. but I didn't like him."

Naruto scrunched his face up in confusion.

"My brother, the one you saw me with on the first page..."

Naruto turned back to the first picture he saw of Sasuke and his family.

"….kind of forced us together...."

Naruto looked back at Sasuke, still confused and patted the bed for Sasuke to come join him on the bed. Sasuke climbed on the bed and lay down beside Naruto, on his side propping himself up on an elbow, like Naruto.

"Well, when I was younger, I thought I could trust my brother with my deepest secrets....you know, like any little kid would do, but I was wrong. My father..."

Sasuke pointed at the man frowning in the photo.

"...hated homosexuals-I know you know where I'm going with this, but when I was just figuring out that I was gay, I was so confused and I didn't have anyone to talk to, because I never really cared to have friends, so all I had at the time was my brother. After I told him, he told me I had to have a boyfriend, but I didn't want one, because I was still trying not to be gay, because I didn't want my father to notice/find out...."

Naruto nodded, staring at Sasuke to continue.

"...When I told my brother that I didn't want a boyfriend, he threatened to tell my father. I was so mad when he forced me to date our neighbor..."

Sasuke flipped the page to the picture of him, Suigetsu and the girl, pointing at Suigetsu.

"...Suigetsu. My brother took advantage of my fear for my father and when my parents weren't home, he would call Suigetsu over and make us...."

Sasuke trailed off and Naruto stared wide-eyed.

"WHAT?! HE MADE YOU GUYS HAVE SEX?!"

Sasuke closed his eyes and shook his head.

"No, he made me suck Suigetsu off and visa versa, while he...jacked off."

Naruto scrunched his face up in disgust. He didn't know whether to be mad that he'd already done….that with some one else, or be happy that he was already experienced.

"Your brother?.....What kind of sick-o gets off while watching his brother suck someone else's cock?"

"Honestly, it kind of turned me on." Sasuke said, nonchalantly.

Naruto's eyes could've popped out of his head, his eyes were so wide.

"What?!"

Sasuke shrugged his shoulders.

"You didn't know what you were getting yourself into when you started hanging out with me. I could say I'm a little….messed up because of him. But he's dead now, so..."

Naruto furrowed his brows.

"Oh yeah, how'd they die?"

Sasuke smirked.

"I killed them."

Naruto stared saucer-eyed and frightened at Sasuke's confession and Sasuke smiled.

"I'm just joking."

'How do you joke about something like that?!' Naruto thought, flabbergasted.

"They went for a ride on our old yacht and somehow there was a spark in the gas tank....How could that even happen?..."

At this Naruto frowned.

"...And they blew up.....well at least it was quick." Sasuke acted solemnly.

Naruto stared back down at the photo of Suigetsu, and Sasuke noticed the contempt on his face.

"Jealous?"

Naruto whipped his head over to look at Sasuke.

"Pfft-Chht-Tssh...No-wh!"(%)

Sasuke pushed Naruto's shoulder to make him lay on his back and climbed over him, leaning down to kiss and lick below Naruto's right earlobe.

"Are you sure?" Sasuke asked in a dangerously low tone.

Naruto answered, by letting out a long shaky breath. Sasuke kissed and licked up Naruto's jaw line, then kissed his lips, running his tongue along his top lip. Naruto parted his lips to let Sasuke in, when his phone rang.

"WHY SATAN? WHY?!" Naruto screamed.

Sasuke dug into Naruto's pocket and pulled out his phone, ready to blast who ever was on the other end. Sasuke held the screen up and read the flashing name.

"Daddy."

Next thing Sasuke knew, his face was in the mattress…..Oh, Naruto had thrown him off, to snatch the phone.

"DAAAAAADDDDYYYYYY!!!!!"

"HI SON!!!"

"YOU'RE BACK IN TOWN??"

"YEP!!"

"YAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!"

Sasuke glared at Naruto for his dismissal.[Just to let you all know, unlike Sasuke's phone, Sasuke can't hear what's being said on the other line.]

"Can you come over?"

"YE-Well.... I have someone with me."

At this Sasuke's ears perked up.

"*Gasp!* A girlfriend?"

"Boy, and I don't know yet."

"AWWW!! A BOY?! Kakashi! It's a boy!!! Bring em' with you! We want to see him!"

Naruto sweat dropped.

'He makes it seem like I'm having a baby.'"O-okay, I'll ask."

Sasuke's brows furrowed in wonderment.[Is that even a word?]

"What time is it?" Iruka asked himself.
"...12:17....Come over as soon as you can okay? We'll see you then. Bye, love you."

"Love you."

Naruto turned to Sasuke.

"Mind meeting my dad...s today?"

Sasuke shrugged his shoulders.

"BUT FIRST!..."

Naruto leaned over and kissed Sasuke on the nose.

"...We eat."

"I made Kiba put some gas in my car, for........making me mad this morning, so we'll take my car kay?" Naruto asked cheerfully.

Sasuke nodded, getting up off the bed and slipping his sandals on.

"Are we going straight there after we get something to eat, or are we coming back after?" Sasuke asked.

"Why would we come back?"

Sasuke shrugged his shoulders.

"Kay let's go....Wait."

Naruto looked down at Sasuke's shoes and shook his head.

"That's not going to work." Naruto said properly.

Sasuke looked down at his flip-flops and rolled his eyes.

"What size shoe do you wear?"

"11 and a half." (&)

"So do I, well 11, you can fit 11's right?"

Sasuke nodded and Naruto slipped off his blue and red swirly Vans and walked out of Sasuke's apartment, into his own and came back out with the same shoes on.

"You buy two pairs of the same shoes?"

"Sometimes, but these are Kiba's."

Sasuke raised a brow.

"What?! I like to match, it's cute." [So do I!]

Naruto locked his door and walked past Sasuke, heading down stairs to his car.

"Y'know teme, since we're best friends and all I think we aughtta' have our keys doubled for each other.

Sasuke's heart jumped at the thought, that's basically like sharing a house…..hmmm

"Why? We practically live with each other anyways."

"*GASP* SO WE'RE ROOM MATES?!"

Sasuke shook his head.

"...Suuuree."

Naruto threw his hands in the air, mimicking a football goal.

"AWSOME! I'M ROOMATES WITH SASUKE UCHIHA!!!" Naruto yelled, and heard car screeches in the distance. Sasuke glared at Naruto looking around.

"Quit acting stupid, dobe! Paparazzi are crazy, and I'm trying to lay low."

Naruto dropped his arms and narrowed his eyes.

".....Oh yeah, I forgot, YOU KILLED YOUR FAMILY!!" Naruto said scowling.

"I. Did. Not. Kill. My. Family…..They killed themselves. They were stubborn when I told them not to take the old yacht, and now they're dead."

Naruto huffed, walking to the passenger side of his burnt orange and black 2005 Dodge Charger Daytona R/T [Haa-aaa-aaaa 0 : )]

"I meant to tell you the other day; your car's pretty impressive."

"Thanks." Naruto said getting in and starting the car.

"So, you wanna' like, go to a fast food restaurant or a restaurant restaurant?"

"I don't care."

"Good, because I wanna' get something quick and go see my dad...s."

Sasuke nodded buckling himself in, as Naruto backed out.


After they stopped and ate some food they were back on the road. Naruto leaned over and turned on his radio, changing the channels.

"Eww, every thing sucks, CD time!" Naruto said, turning on his CD player. Naruto smiled as soon as he heard the beat boxing and whipped his head over looking at Sasuke smiling.

You’re just too good to be true.
Can’t take my eyes off you.
You’d be like heaven to touch.
Naruto ran his hand down his lips to his chest sensually balling his hand into a fist looking back at the road.
I wanna hold you so much.
At long last love has arrived.
And I thank God I’m alive.
You’re just too good to be true.
Can’t take my eyes off you.

Pardon the way that I stare.
There’s nothing else to compare.
The sight of you leaves me weak.
Naruto pressed the palm of his hand over his heart smiling.
There are no words left to speak.
But if you feel like I feel.
Naruto glanced back at Sasuke with a pleading look.
Please let me know that it’s real.
You’re just too good to be true.
Can’t take my eyes off you.

"You need to keep your eyes on the road, loser."
Naruto ignored Sasuke and continued singing, closing his eyes and balling his hand up in a fist against his chest.

I need you baby, and if it’s quite all right,
I need you baby to warm a lonely night.
Naruto reopened his eyes and turned the car around a corner quickly, still singing and smiling.
I love you baby. trust in me when I say ok:
Oh pretty baby, don’t let me down I pray.
Oh pretty baby, now that I found you, stay.
And let me love you,
Oh baby let me love you, oh baby

You’re just too good to be true.
Naruto sang the rest of the song, swaying from side to side.
Can’t take my eyes off you.
You’d be like heaven to touch.
I wanna hold you so much.
At long last love has arrived.
And I thank God I’m alive.
You’re just too good to be true.
Can’t take my eyes off you.

I need you baby, and if it’s quite all right,
I need you baby to warm a lonely night.
I love you baby. trust in me when I say it’s ok
Oh pretty baby, don’t let me down I pray.
Oh pretty baby, now that I found you, stay.
And let me love you,
Oh baby let me love you, oh baby

I need you baby, and if it’s quite all right,
I need you baby to warm a lonely night.
I love you baby. trust in me when I say it’s ok
Oh oh pretty baby, don’t let me down I pray. oh pretty
Baby, now that I found you, stay. and let me
Love you, oh baby let me...

After the song was over and another one started, he lowered the sound. Naruto laughed at Sasuke's glare and pulled out his cell phone, to notice a text from a person he hadn't seen in ages.

"No way." Naruto said to himself texting the person back.

For ten minutes, they drove in silence. Naruto looked over at Sasuke while he was driving.

"How do you get your hair to stick up in the back like that?" Naruto asked, reaching over to run his hand through Sasuke's hair making Sasuke shiver.

"I could ask you the same thing." Sasuke said, coolly.

Naruto dragged his hand down Sasuke's neck and let it rest there gripping tenderly.

"My hair is layered. It does it itself." Naruto said, watching the road.

Sasuke heard Naruto speaking, but was more focused on the hand on his neck.

"Your hand is warm." Sasuke half said half thought, closing his eyes and leaning back.

Naruto looked over at Sasuke, took his hand away and put it on his cheek, then flashed him a bright smile.

"I guess I am warm huh?"

Naruto looked in his rear view mirror and smiled.

"I want some candy. Imma pull over to this dollar store, kay? Then once we leave you're gonna drive kay?"

"What, are you going to rob the store?"

Naruto rolled his eyes.

"Just had to kill the moment, didn't you?"

"You already killed it, by whining about candy."

Naruto stared at Sasuke.

"You're a beezie."

"Hn."

Naruto pulled up to the dollar store and got out. As he was walking into the store a blonde girl with a white shirt and purple skirt, walked up to Naruto and whipped him around and kissed him hard. Sasuke sat wide-eyed, staring at the outrageous scene. Sasuke was about to get out the car and cut-a-bitch until

'WHAT?!'

Naruto gripped her shoulders and kissed her back. After too long Naruto pulled away and looked dead at Sasuke....is that a smile? Sasuke glared acid through the windshield, at Naruto as he walked in the store with his arm around that bitch's waist.

Five minutes later, Sasuke switched sides, and was in the driver's seat when Naruto came out of the store with a small white bag and that whore. As they parted they kissed once more. Naruto walked up to the car and opened the door smiling.

"The fuck are you smiling about?" Sasuke spit out bitterly.

Naruto's smile got bigger.

"Geeze Sasuke, language! That was my step-sister Ino. I haven't seen her in ages!" Naruto said happily.

"Then why'd you kiss her like that?" Sasuke asked, still glaring.

"Hmmm.....to make you jealous....and it looks like...mission accomplished?" Naruto asked sheepishly.

'How cute, he wanted to make me jealous.' Sasuke thought while his glare intensified.

"Okaay, mission accomplished." Naruto said, shrinking back into his chair, buckling in.

Sasuke started the car and backed out of the parking lot. As they drove, Naruto looked over at Sasuke's stoic face, resting on his palm, driving with the other hand.

'*Siiigh* I didn't want him to stay mad, just get mad.' Naruto thought.
"A-are you still mad at me?" Naruto asked hesitantly.

Sasuke looked over at Naruto slowly, face still impassive.

'He's so cute.Sasuke thought.

"Hmmm....Nahh." That's just you..."

Naruto inwardly smiled.

"...stupid, idiot, dobe, Naruto."

"Dang homeboy! Doesn't seem like you're not mad! That was three insults in a row!"

Sasuke smirked.

"What's your favorite color, black huh? Turn left at the next light."

Sasuke frowned.

"Why are you so random?"

"Why are you so rude?"

"You're a loud-mouthed, loser and nobody likes you."

"*Gasp!*You're a cold-hearted, bastard and nobody likes you!"

"You're such a dobe."

"Turn right at the stop sign. You're such a TEME!"

"I hate you!"

"I LOVE YOU!" Naruto quickly slapped a hand over his mouth and Sasuke jerked the car while turning, in bewilderment.

"WHAT?!" Sasuke asked, astonished.

"What, what? I didn't say anything!"

"You're a liar! I heard you say it!"

"Say what?!"

"I love you!"

'Bingo'

Naruto acted surprised and placed his hand on his chest.

"*Gasp* You do?! Oh Sasuke!-"

"Don't even try it." Sasuke said.

"Okay, so what if I did? First house on the left."

Sasuke's heart raced, as he pulled into the driveway of a small mansion. Sasuke opened his mouth to answer, before Naruto flung the door open, getting out before the car even stopped.

"DAAAADDDYYY!!!!" Naruto hugged his silver haired step-father, leaning in close, whispering. "Thanks for being out here, you saved my ass from the confession of my life."

Kakashi nodded into his shoulder.

"Where's Iruka?" He asked a little louder.

"He's inside, where's your boyfriend, I want to see him."

"Daa-aaaad!" Naruto whined.

Sasuke heard this and smiled to himself, getting out of the car.

"Uchiha, hm?"

"Kakashi?" Sasuke asked, unbelievingly.

Naruto stood confused.

"So, I take it you two know each other?......Small world, eh?" He said smiling.


TBC

(!)You all know how it feels to miss a flight….you're all like, "SHIT! FUCK! DAMN! MAYONNAISE IN A PACKAGE!
(*) I KNOW I'm not the only one who does that………...A-am I?
(#) Not faggot like gay, but like punk or ass or something….because really……is he in any place to call anyone a faggot?......I think not.
(%)No-wh…..hmmm like No with an a-ish sound….kind of said like the person is offended…or taken aback.
(&) Would that be a proper size for someone their age??? IDK!!!!

Sorry it took so long to update.....*SIIIIGHHH* after I took a good break from writing this, I started getting ideas again........soo this loooong chapter is the result : )….and if it's not long…. It felt long to me. THANXX FOR READING!! NOW VOTE & REVIEW! AND TELL THE WOOOORRRLD!!! HAHAHA I LOVE YOU ALL SOOOO VERY MUCH AND I LOVE HEARING FROM YOU!! E-MAIL ME SOME TIME!! ring_pahp@hotmail.com!!!
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