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Bad Day

By: kitsuko999
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male › Naruto/Sasuke
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 11
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Into The She-Devil's Lair

Title: Bad Day


Authoress: SasuNaru723


Anime: Naruto

Pairings: SasuNaru; sort of InoNaru, but it’s only one-sided.


Rating: M (because of language and future smut for sure throughout additional chapters).


Summary: A new ‘replacement’ and a new captain to lead Team Kakashi or whatever was left of it. Not to mention his two stalkers now sleeping under the same roof as him just a few rooms away from his own room. No protection, no where to hide… it could only get worse for Uzumaki Naruto, now couldn’t it?


‘…’ = thoughts


“…” = talking





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'Forget Sasuke’ Naruto spat within his brooding thoughts, eyebrows furrowed as he scowled at anything his peripheral landed on as his body strode in powerful long strides through the nearly empty halls. Thank god that they were empty else Naruto would probably knock whoever got in his way to the ground without a second thought crossing his mind. He was too pissed to see clearly or to even care about anything for the moment except getting to Ino’s room and getting those damn pictures from her.





‘The only thing that Sai’s worried about is him not getting my ass and someone else he hates getting it first! That’s exactly what his problem is! It’s complete jealousy! Well –I don’t give a rat’s ass if he’s jealous or pissed at Sasuke and my decisions; I want Sasuke and only him! I won’t let anyone else touch or have me regardless if the crude bastard accepts my offer or not!’





As Naruto finally came around the corner to the hall that Ino and Sakura’s room resided, he felt that something wasn’t right because his back was tensing up and his nose inhaled an all too familiar scent that made Naruto’s stomach churn.





‘Blood?’ he wondered bewilderedly, unsure if it really could possibly be for the scent was faint, but strong enough to be detected just feet away from in the middle of the hall for someone like Naruto with a sensitive nose.





Naruto inhaled deeply once more, this time concentrating mainly on just that scent, and that’s when he found it was coming from Ino’s room.





Alarmed that Ino could be critically injured at least enough to give off a small scent of her blood within the atmosphere, Naruto carefully maneuvered him self stealthily toward the closed door. He leaned his back pressed up against the wall, his eyes focused on the door as though readying himself in case if someone was to come out of the room and attack on instinct of seeing him.





‘If Ino really is injured within that room, then I need to know who the hell injured her and just how many there are. It would be really stupid to just barge in and hope to god that no one is hiding in a blind spot I can’t see and then shanks me one right in the ribs or up the ass. That would be a pretty embarrassing injury to have Sakurachan or even Tsunade-no-baachan heal for me; that is if it would be considered a healable wound depending on how deep the wound is made.’





A new important fact came into mind right then and Naruto frowned darkly at this thought.





‘Didn’t Sai just say that he had gotten pictures from Ino? And from the way that he was coming, there’s no doubt that he had just came from her room. But Ino’s injured, right? And if she really is and maybe there’s no one inside, then that can only mean it was Sai that had attacked her. But why?’





He felt a bit infuriated if it was truly Sai that had injured Ino. Naruto would charge right after the bastard and make the younger male bleed open an artery if it was true of him attacking Ino. Yes, Ino was blackmailing him and stalking him, but even still –she was a comrade of Naruto’s village and that was good enough for him to fight for her.





‘I won’t know the true facts until I get my ass in there and hound down answers, now will I? I guess if the worst comes to worst I can always get Sakurachan here pronto to save me from death. Thank god for medical shinobi and their awesome works!’





“First things first though,” he muttered and right away he was already forming seals with his hands quietly.





“Kage Buushin no Jutsu!”





At that moment, three exact copies of Naruto appeared huddling around him by the closed door to Ino’s room.





He looked at his copies with such a serious face of a leader; he was indeed their leader.





“Ino’s in there and it smells like she’s injured, but I’m not sure if there may be other’s inside that are the enemy. We need to come up with a quick and as non-careless as possible plan that won’t get me severely injured and you guys poof into smoke. Now, anyone up for grabs?”





The Naruto on the far left nearest to the door’s knob perked up already at the challenge presented.





“I say that we do a round house,” he suggested eagerly. He was obviously talking about one of Naruto’s old time trick moves, the Uzumaki Rendan that he had partly mimicked from Lee and Sasuke, Lee being the main creator of the move.





The other one nearest to that Naruto grinned at the idea, “That sounds like a kickass plan!”





The real Naruto immediately smacked the last one that spoke and then landed another backhanded slap on the one that suggested the idea in the first place.





The two Naruto’s that were smacked ‘ow’ed their surprise of the slight pain and of the attack; they both frowned and pouted across at their maker whom was glowering at them.





“That’s the most fucking retarded plan I’ve heard from any of my own clones! What the hell is wrong with you two? Did I not make you right or something?” growled the original.





“No,” the two said in unison to deny that they were incorrectly created while looking defeated as they lowered their gazes shamefully to the ground; they were the kids being scolded by their own mother.





Naruto, the real one, crossed his arms irritably and huffed his breath out. Despite them suggesting a foolish plan like of what he would have suggested a few years ago, Naruto still didn’t feel like lecturing himself was something he was willing to use his time up on for the moment. Right now, Ino was in need of help and Naruto wanted to get to the bottom of whatever the hell was going on in that room.





“That idea and any others you two had that’s just as foolish as that one –you two can kiss out the damn window right now! I want some real ideas –one’s that don’t involve us running in necessarily with our asses’ to be laid out vulnerable to the enemy! You two got that?” demanded the original, still glaring daggers at his look-alikes.





They both looked up into his angered eyes, blue eyes challenging identical blue eyes.





“Why just only us two?” asked the one nearest to the door, sounding all pissed for being only seen as a child.





The one next to him had the exact same attitude toward their maker. He eyed the other Naruto near to him, the one that was next to the original and had yet to speak.





“What about him?” he growled as he nodded his head toward the Naruto next to the original Naruto.





The original Naruto narrowed his eyes and scoffed at the pitiful complaints from the two clones.





“He’s not pissing me off and saying such stupid bullshit right now. Is he?”





The original didn’t even wait to hear their replied ‘yes’s’ or give them extra precious seconds for more b-s-ing.





“No –he isn’t! Now, where the bloody hell are the grand plans that I know we can come up with here on such a short notice and time limit goddammit?” Naruto leered over next to his other clone that hadn’t spoken yet but was just brooding in silence. “And what about you, quiet one? You gonna just stand on your own head and make cobwebs all day? Give me a good fucking plan already!”





The silent Naruto titled his head toward his make’s direction and glared hauntingly at him, the really eerie cold look that Gaara was very well known for displaying. The original Naruto glared just as darkly back, angered that one of his own clones –which he frickin’ made and brought into this world- would dare to defy against him.





“Did it ever occur to you that maybe Ino isn’t really in peril, but that she just got a simple little cut on accident?” growled the quiet Naruto clone.





The original was about to lash out insults and threats toward his own clone, when suddenly he did consider what his clone had just told him. He gazed at nothing-in particular as he thought more about the idea in his own head and argued with it himself.





‘Ino wasn’t attacked? Ino only could have gotten a little scratch or a cut from her carelessness? That…’





Naruto groaned and smacked the center of his forehead with the heel of his palm. The two Naruto’s from across blinked confusingly at the display, while the other Naruto, the one that was silent for most of the time till just seconds ago, smirked pleasingly.





‘Fuck! That’s what it is –and I didn’t think of it first! My own fucking clone did!’





The original calmed him self down enough to drop his hand back to his side and look up at his three duplicates gazing at him, two looking at him expectantly, and the other looking like he just hit the jackpot with ease.





Naruto pointed a firm finger at his smirking clone, “Don’t even think about saying another goddamn word, smartass.”





Cursing more silently under his breath he motion toward the doorknob and moved his hands quickly to undo the seal.





“You three are obviously no longer needed then,” he said before they poofed and the smoke faded into thin air, “I can certainly handle it all from right here.”





Naruto’s attitude was back to what it was before he had reached Ino’s room; determined and irritated.





He grabbed at the doorknob, ‘I hope to god she gets whatever the hell I have to do over with already. Else I won’t be able to withstand her damn gleeful giggling and smirks thrown my way through the entire goddamn show as she calls it,’ and turned the doorknob and pushed open the door to take a peek inside.





The light was mildly dim within the room due to the currents already drawn shut and all lights turned off except for a few candles placed randomly around the room; they’re small flame flickering off visible heat above their mesmerizing dancing flames.





Gulping unexpectedly with his throat feel a little too tight for comfort, Naruto ventured with great caution inside the room, barely closing the door behind him in fear that there would be no emergency exit out just in case if things started to get too weird and out of hand for him to control.





“…Um… H-He-Hello?” called out Naruto nervously with his dry voice croaking.





He cursed at himself for sounding so weak and scared, just like how Ino most probably wanted him to be right now.





Clearing his throat roughly and this time pushing back his own nervousness, he tried once more, but without any trace of weakness to be found within his voice.





“Oi, Ino-buta? Show your ugly face already and let’s get this over with!” he growled, making sure to vocally give off his impatience.





Suddenly a breeze blew within the room, igniting out all the candles’ light with the door right behind Naruto swinging viciously shut, the loud sound of a click sound following suit.





Everything was now pitch black within the area and Naruto was desperately trying to make his eyes adjust quickly to the darkness so that he could see beyond the shadows for any sign of movement.





‘Oh shit! The door’s locked! The fucking door is locked! I AM TRAPPED IN HERE!!’





“How dare you,” rumbled a deep feminine voice somewhere within the dark room.





And suddenly, there was an odd noise of a long rope from Naruto had assumed based by the sound of it being tossed into the air. It came toward him and he had yet to realize that that something, which was thin yet long and thick material, had wrapped itself around his two legs, binding them snuggle together.





“Call me…”





That thick material that was tied around his legs, Naruto had come to figure it was a long whip, pulled with great force and had him instantly loosing his balance and falling backwards.





“Ugly!”





Naruto came crashing down toward the ground but not right before having his forehead whack hard into something solid on his way down.





In that moment his eyelids grew so heavy so quickly that they closed; his hearing, the last to go out was picking up the inner frantic pounding of his heart beating to the last beat till he finally slumped into unconsciousness.







TBC





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I know that you are all wondering when Sasuke is going to come into the picture. Don’t worry, he’ll show up in due time.



So in the meantime, I’ve got a little bit of a lime/lemon made for you guys coming up in the next chapter (a little something for you pervies to drool over). I’m not giving you any hints of what it’s about; you’ll just have to see for yourself as soon as I post the next chapter!


And of course my moment of personal gratitude toward those of you that have reviewed for Bad Day:


Nusku: Yes, Ino is totally a wench in here yet she’s perfect for the job.

LadyRonin: The chapter was referring to Sai (Sasuke has yet to be mentioned but he will soon within the next few chapters). And I like how you stated it (the whole god vs. god theory). Here you have Naruto whom everyone sees him in similarity to the wind god and then there’s Sasuke which he is in similar to the thunder god. Both two gods are always clashing with one another just as they do during a thunderstorm (at least to me if feels like it).

ilovenaruto I know what you mean about not wanting to start on a story that’s not quite finished. There’s always that worry that the author may not update for such a long time (as in months) or worse –discontinue the story. I’ve had a few of my favorite stories be discontinued or at least not updated still in over half a year or more and I tell you, it really saddens me that I won’t get to see how the story ends. As for Bad Day you have nothing to worry of me not updating for months or even consider discontinuing this story. No way –no how. I love this story as much as the readers love it. Writing Bad Day makes me feel happy and so energized that I love the emotions I put between characters in each chapter –good and bad emotions. Also I appreciate your comment on liking my writing style. There’s days were I like it, days to where I love it, and days to where I absolutely hate it.

And that’s all for my comments to Bad Day’s previous chapter! I know you all are waiting for Sasuke to appear and so I’m getting this story on a roll as fast as I can without rushing it to the point of Sasuke’s grand entrance. I thank all of you for you kind and encouraging comments! They put a smile on my face every time! ^_^



~SasuNaru723~

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