The Fox and the Leaf

The Fox and the leaf
My first fan fiction please don't flame me if its bad explain why to me in a review don't just go off on a tangent saying it was crap tell me why you didn't like it and maybe ill fix it or something like that or i can just tell you to go to well you get the idea if its integral to the story line.

Disclaimer: i don't own naruto if i did Sasuke would have died ( I'm sorry fan girls i truly am but the bastard has it coming for betraying his friends I know I know he's had a terrible past seeing his brother killing his family true but naruto don't have a family and look at all he's had to put up with and he don't go around all dark and broody and wanting to betray everyone)
( at least not yet ill take a poll on that later if i get good reviews on this...)
Authors note, This story will from the get go be an AU there will be some parts that are the same as the magna's/TV show i hope that i don't make the characters way ooc although they will be a little because after all it is in a alternate universe hmm Pairings will be Naru/Hinata Lee/Saku Shika/Ino and Neji/Tenten. There will be no Yaoi in this or any of my future stories its just not my thing.
As for how it's au well that'll be obvious after the first three sentinces
words in ' will be the Kyuubi or inner thought " will be normal speach again this is my first fan fic so if anyone know's how to do italics or bold lemme know
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Naruto and company were walking back to the village accompanied by several mednins having failed to rescue Sasuke, No one really knew what happened in the battle because when Shikamaru arrived with the mednins Sasuke was already dead and Naruto was barely hanging in there the Kyuubi being the only thing keeping him alive. No one felt much like talking each thinking to themselves about how they failed except for Naruto He was trying to remember just what happened in the fight
'I know that Sasuke was winning i felt his Chidori connect with me before i blacked out how did he die? was it me did i do it or was someone else there? Did i really kill Sasuke ?'
'You really think that it was someone else Brat? Do you really think that you 'blacked out'? HAHAHAHAHA it was me you dumb brat i took control of your desperately injured body and i slaughtered the Uchiha I enjoyed feeling his blood over my claws and the fear in his eyes as he witnessed TRUE POWER not what pitiful displays of power you humans put on display for each other but true demonic power something i haven't been able to do since that bastard of a human put me under this god forsaken seal '

'NO you LIE Bastard FOX!! Sasuke was my friend i would never kill him !!! he was one of the people i swore to protect, he was one of my 'special people' the ones i swore on my way of the ninja that I would protect with my life.'
'Foolish child you had no control You wanted him to feel pain to know what he has done to you, you wanted him to see you as an equal HAHAHA he saw you as an equal right up until you sunk your fist through his heart. If you still don't believe me I will show you exactly what happened back there'
'Ok demon fox have it your way i need to know the truth what exactly happened for my sake and yours tell me the truth or else ill jump the first cliff i see just to make you pay for making me lie to Sakura and to break my Vow.
'Ok Brat just don't say i haven't warned you'
"Sasuke, Please don't make me do this...""
Naruto begs Sasuke as he starts charging the Rasengan " I promised Sakura-Chan to bring you home alive."
" YOU THINK I CARE ABOUT YOUR PROMISES DOBE?" Sasuke yells," I DONT CARE WHAT YOU PROMISED TO WHO I ONLY CARE ABOUT GAINING AS MUCH POWER AS I CAN SCREW YOU AND SAKURA AND THE REST OF THAT DAMN VILLAGE THEY NEVER DID ANYTHING TO HELP ME ANYWAY THEY ONLY HELD ME BACK!! NOW NARUTO LETS FINISH WHAT WE STARTED ON THE ROOF LETS SEE WHAT IS STRONGER YOUR RASENGAN OR MY CHIDORI!!!"
Having said his piece Sasuke charged at Naruto with his Chidori.Wild thoughts ran through Naruto's head, was this really it was he really going to be able to kill Sasuke? As they drew closer Naruto knew he couldn't kill Sasuke no matter if he was a traitor to Leaf, He lowered his Rasengan to deal a heavy wound but not kill. Sasuke noticed this and took advantage hitting Naruto Square in the heart . Naruto coughing blood hit the ground hard . When he hit he was knocked out, noting this the Kyuubi leaped forward to take control knowing he couldn't really take full control because of the seal but in this weakened state of his host he knew that he could at the very least take out his anger on who was harming the kit,because although he hated the kid he was growing attached to being alive, even if it was in this damnable cell in this dumb child. Sasuke was closing again with the Chidori charging,
" Farewell dobe I told you before you couldn't touch me, you were to the last a failure."
As he approached he felt power pulsing from the fallen Naruto. As he stopped and stared at the fallen Shinobi he saw red chakra start swirling around Naruto in such a pattern as to resemble the Kyuubi.
" So Naruto that is the big secrete why everyone hates you and how you got so powerful so fast ,but even your lil bastard fox cant save you now your going to die here. "
But as he watched the chakra he felt afraid something he didn't feel often so without a further thought he attacked the fallen Naruto. Only to be blocked by a solid wall of chakra, Starring and trying to figure out why he couldn't attack he was stunned to watch naruto stand up and face him. "Those eyes I've seen them before there exactly the same as the forest when he stopped the snake with the two kunai" he thought to himself as he tried to force his way thought the barrier.
" That wont do you any good Sasuke "said the Kyuubi through Naruto's mouth, " No single ninja has ever been able to kill me and someone who is as weak as you couldn't even scratch the surface of a simple barrier shield that I've erected now Uchiha Sasuke it is time you met your maker " Saying that the Kyuubi attacked with a speed faster then Lee without his weights in a matter of seconds the Kyuubi controlled Naruto, had his hand buried inside Sasuke's chest crushing his heart.
'There Kit now you know exactly what happened after you blacked out, you can thank me later for saving your life,
Naruto didn't know what to think did he actually do that or was it all a plan by the Kyuubi to cause him pain? It was true that when he came to the mednins wouldn't let him see Sasuke's body and he was covered in blood but he thought it was his own from Sasuke's attacks. Realizing he has stopped walking he ran to catch up with his team still thinking over what the Kyuubi has shown him .No he told himself No it cant be true i didn't do that i couldn't do that to a friend.
'Deny it all you want to Kit it don't change the fact that i do not lie not to you or to anyone i have no reason to lie to you for any reason, besides it was enjoyable and its even more enjoyable to see you squirm wondering if I'm telling you the truth.
'SHUT UP BASTARD FOX! Leave me alone!! "LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!" Naruto didn't realize he shouted that out loud or that he was clutching his head with his hands till the mednins rushed over to him. All Naruto could say before he passed out completely was, "Tell Sakura im sorry for killing him i didn't mean to, it just didn't I'm sorry..."

(A/N i tried to clean it up as best as i could like i said this is my first real attempt im going to continue it but im going to need someone who can look over it after ive wrote a chapter and maby gimme some suggestions as well as fix most of my mistakes .)